Monday, June 23, 2008

After a year of no fanfiction, here's a very short intro of a new series. Set after Serenity. Please tell me what you think!


Malcolm Reynolds walked down the steps of Serenity, admiring the look of the lights reflecting off of her soft interior. The captain could never be accused of being artistic in any way, shape, or form but he could recognize beauty when he saw it. And to him, beauty was Serenity…his ship. He came at last to his destination; the infirmary. The doc was busy doctoring with the limited medical equipment on board and looked up when the captain entered. “Captain?” he asked curiously, and a bit suspiciously. “Should arrive on Demeter in ‘bout two hours time, but the job’s not for another three. Still, don’t want no body to leave the ship unless necessary.” “Of course,” Simon nodded, still curious. “We’ve been doing well lately in money terms, and so I was wonderin if there was some medical equipment you might need…in case of emergencies,” Mal added at the end, and Simon cocked an eyebrow. “Is there, erm, something a bit more hazardous about this job that I should know about?” he asked, and from the captain’s slight squirm he knew he’d hit the mark. “Hopin not, but we’ve not had good dealins with the Lady Lavender lately, and I just wanted to be prepared.” “I see,” the doctor said, and looked at the captain expectantly. “There’s…something else,” he added and Simon cocked an eyebrow. “I’m gonna ask our new pilot to come along, and wanna make sure there won’t be any problems between you and me.” Simon exhaled. So this was the reason. He contemplated his answer a moment. “Well, I suppose that my sister has showed she’s more than capable of handling these type of situations.” The captain muttered in agreement, and they both were momentarily lost in their memories. Finally Simon continued. “And I think she’s grown up to the point that she can make decisions herself. I won’t hinder your activities Captain, so long as you don’t needlessly put her in harm’s way.” “Then there’s nothing to worry about, Doc. ‘Sides, I think a boy would be more danger to yer sister than any other weapon someone could point at her.” Simon frowned, and the captain hastily departed before giving the older-brother something else to worry about. “Hey, Lil’ Albatross,” the captain said, and then stopped as he saw River Tam wrapped in a passionate kiss. His voice startled the two, and as they pulled back, the captain saw who she had been kissing. “Ji dain mai, JAYNE?”


Monday, June 23, 2008 5:05 PM


And if you have time, compare it to my previous series "Dancing".

Monday, June 23, 2008 9:49 PM


Nice start! Gives a good idea where the crew is, and that they've been doing well, and with the possibility of Jayne being put out of the airlock ... Looking forward to more!

Tuesday, June 24, 2008 3:12 AM


Uh Oh! Jayne'd better be carefull, Simon and Mal might just strangle him! Looking forward to more!

Keep flying ;)

Tuesday, June 24, 2008 9:29 AM


Oh no! Jayne better be running! Good work. can't wait for more

Tuesday, June 24, 2008 4:08 PM


Ahhh! Jayne!! Ahhh! Get him, River!!!!

Thursday, June 26, 2008 5:48 AM


YAY!! New Rayne fic! *Does happy Rayne dance* So happy and excited!

Friday, June 27, 2008 3:18 PM


Thanks to all of you who have read and commented! I, of course, live for comments and to everyone else please feel free! I'd really like to know how you think about this, and the next part of the series The Song of Serenity Part 1,2, and now 3!!


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Song of Serenity Part 6
The next installment of my Rayne series, but can be read as a standalone. It's technically romance, but with some humor as well.

Song of Serenity Part 5
Jayne learns the first move of the Song of Serenity...and unfortunately the second as well.

Song of Serenity Part 4
Finally, the next installment of my Rayne series. The Job on Faemont finally arrives, and things get a bit more interesting than even Jayne likes.

Because you filled my heart
Short but sweet standalone

Song of Serenity Part 3
The next little piece in my Rayne series! Things between Jayne and River heat up as they prepare for the next job.

Song of Serenity Part 2
Sequel to Song of Serenity. After a strange night, Jayne learns a few things about music.

Song of Serenity
Sequel to "Unexpected" with this being a couple months previously. Rayne, of course.

After a year of no fanfiction, here's a very short intro of a new series. Set after Serenity. Please tell me what you think!

Dancing Part 6
6th part in my Rayne series, and the most well-written one yet (from my perspective, lol) River talks with everyone about their reactions to her and Jayne's relationship.
P.S.: < > means a flashback

Dancing Part 5
Things heat up for River and Jayne, and the rest of the crew are not happy about it.