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RIVER6213

My Strange Story Part IIb
Monday, June 18, 2007

Buffy and Shadowfly are about to mix it up


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1935    RATING: 10    SERIES: FIREFLY

…River6213 started to feel something in her legs and arms; she could actually move them a bit. “Great, I’m not paralyzed” River6213 thinks. The sound of the helicopter overhead was pretty loud and getting louder, but through it she thought she could hear other voices speaking. River6213 was feeling rather panicked at this point. “ShadowFLY can’t be too far away” she mutters to herself. “I’ve got to get out of here” she thinks. River6213 starts the nasty business of dragging herself out from under the wreck that used to be a very nice Jaguar. She pulls herself from underneath the vehicle just in time to see two figures standing across from each other regarding each other. There is nothing but silence until the figure closes to her says “State your Business.” River 6213 doesn’t recognize the nearest figure standing there, but she right away knows who the other figure is. “Oh shit!” River6213 says out loud as her gaze falls onto the duffel carrying figure of Shadowfly...

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Thursday, June 21, 2007 6:25 AM

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Outstanding! I just caught up with your latest installments. Short but shiny. Suspence is building nicely. Keep writing.
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