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Monday, August 14, 2006

More fun with Mal and Inara


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 8057    RATING: 3    SERIES: FIREFLY

Inara smiled as Mal sat on the bed and cocked her head. She traced the hem of her shirt with her middle finger and opened the bottom button. Mal watched with rapt attention as she unbuttoned her shirt slowly, finally revealing the cleft of her breasts and a white bra. After the shirt hit the carpet her skirt quickly followed.

“Beautiful,” whispered Mal.

Inara sauntered towards the bed and crawled onto it. She kissed Mal who immediately roved his hands all over her shapely body. He unhooked her bra and rolled her onto her back, tossing the garment far, far away. Little time was wasted kissing her lips when those soft breasts were so naked.

Mal took a nipple between his lips and sucked it. Each breast was cupped in one hand but there was so much more of Inara to touch that he wished he had a few extra arms. Inara giggled at his enthusiasm and the slight tickling sensation of his tongue roving her chest. He was eager to taste every inch of her body. To that end he was dropping his knees to the floor and pulling Inara's panties off, going straight for the most precious morsel.

She let him prop her legs apart in his hands and dive in. His dripping tongue sloshed across her pussy, making her gasp in pleasure. Mal was making "mmm" sounds as his tongue slithered around her outer labia. Her pussy practically flowered for him all on its own, letting his tongue probe inside as far as it could go.

When she was properly moaning on the bed he moved up to her clitoris and flicked it with his tongue. The moans came close to cries of ecstasy. Her thighs suddenly closed around his head, locking him into a position where all he could do was tongue her clit.

Inara's hips jerked and writhed, taking Mal's head with them. He nearly pulled a muscle in his neck. To save himself some pain the next morning he focused in on her clit and licked it as fast as possible. "Yes! Oh god!" cried out Inara. Mal went harder and faster and was soon rewarded with a gush of cum.

Even then he would not stop. "Ah, ah, ah," chirped Inara. She released his head and pushed him away. "Oh god stop I can't take it!"

"Ha," said Mal. He stood up and took his shirt off. "Let's see if you can take this." He slipped his boots off and dropped his pants.

"Yeah, show me what you got Mal!" encouraged Inara.

When the last of his clothes were off he leapt onto the bed next to Inara. Her hands immediately sought out his cock and he began kissing her as she stroked him into hardness. She slipped her fingers between their fighting tongues, getting them slick with their saliva. Inara used it to give his cock a little thrill.

The bigger thrill came when the jerking slowed and Inara rotated her body around, straddling Mal's face. Inara's pussy engulfed Mal's nose. Lowering herself, Inara’s mouth engulfed Mal's cock. Inara knew that her clients loved the blowjobs she was prone to giving. She got a rush from oral sex and it manifested itself in a certain obscene sloppiness.

By now there were bubbles of saliva accumulating on Mal's cock and it was so wet that she had trouble keeping her hands from slipping off as she jerked him off. The sloshing and slurping was music to Mal's ears. Meanwhile, the energy she was blowing into his dick was instantly returned by Mal's quick tongue into her clit. The synergy had both of them rolling towards an orgasm faster than would normally be possible.

Inara primed her throat for her next little trick. She bobbed up and down, going a little harder with every bob. When she was ready she took his cock all the way down, deep throating him with the enthusiasm of the cock hungry woman she was. "Oh shit Inara!" groaned Mal. He could not keep the circle going now that Inara had his dick so far down that her nose was rubbing against his balls.

She carefully pulled it back out and then dove down again. Inara fiddled with his balls as she moved her tongue around in the limited room in her mouth. After she pulled it out again she yelled, "Give me your fucking cum! Come in my fucking mouth!"

"Oh god here it comes baby, here it fucking comes!" cried out Mal. With that verbal cue she slipped his cock down her throat one more time and gave his scrotum a little scratch. He burst into her so hard that she could almost feel the cum flowing through his shaft. Inara backed off until only the head was in her mouth so she could taste the precious fluid before it disappeared into her stomach. Only one or two streams coated her tongue but it was enough to give her the thrill she wanted.

Mal's ministrations along with the rush she got from a having a man come in her mouth had her pussy sopping wet. Inara was presently surprised at Mal's remarkable recovery; by the time she had sucked his cock dry it was almost ready to go again. A simple handjob was all that was needed before Mal was ready.

Inara spun around. "Give it to me hard Mal, I want you to fuck me.”

"You want it hard, you'll get it hard!" He scooted out from under her. Mal moved behind her and shoved her down, burying her face in the pillows. "Ass in the air Inara!" he ordered. Inara put her knees under her and raised her hips into a prone position. With no fanfare he slammed himself all the way into her pussy in one rough stroke. He started fast and he did not let up. He kept his hand on her back to keep her down, the muffled cries spurring him on.

"Oh yeeaaah," groaned Mal. Her pussy was just wrapped so tightly around his cock that he wanted to slow down just so he could discern the finer points of her hot little pussy. But Inara would not have it. She was pushing back in time with his strokes and madly tweaking a nipple with one hand, her clit with the other.

For the next few minutes she pushed her face even harder into the pillow, cutting her air intake by half. The oxygen deprivation made every flesh crashing stroke that much more intense. The reaming he was giving her was driving her wild with lust. Briefly she lifted her head. "Stick your finger in my fucking ass!"

"I'll do you one better." He tickled her cute butthole with his middle finger. Then he shoved it and his index finger inside. "Two if you're a really bad girl."

"I'm such a bad little girl!" moaned Inara breathlessly. "Give it to me!" Her body was throbbing with pleasure. Mal had to slow down a little to give himself room but he gladly gave her another finger. "Fuck yes!" A few more moments of this double penetration was all that she could take. Her pussy seemed to ignite with pleasure and it spread through her like wildfire. She reared back with an ear shattering cry of ecstasy.

They nearly toppled off the bed from Inara's earth quaking orgasm. Mal was able to balance out though and Inara was soon back on her hands and knees. He focused on fucking as fast as possible. Inara was not as energetic as before, except for her mouth. "I want you to feed me your cum you fucker!"

"You want another fucking load?!" said Mal.

"Yes I want another fucking load! Give it to me baby, fucking give it to me!"

"Oh god." Mal pulled out and Inara flipped over in a flash. He straddled her chest and she jacked his cock as fast as her hands could go. This orgasm was even more powerful than the last, draining his balls and soaking Inara's face and outstretched tongue with his cum. A rope splashed straight down the center of her face and another grazed her cheek. The flow finally slowed down until the last of it dribbled onto her neck. Proving just how nasty she could be she eagerly gathered the cum with her fingers and sucked it down.

"You are amazing baby," said Mal in the aftermath.

"Don't I know it," said Inara as she licked the last droplets of cum off her lips.

COMMENTS

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 2:20 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


Of the few lines that I was able to read: the characters' voices are completely off, the sex is crude, and the lack of any sense of plot or explanation really makes it harder to read.

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 2:35 AM

WILDHEAVENFARM


Lord love a duck, I can't wait to see the reviews on this one!

Fight the power, peclicken.

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 2:54 AM

MAVOURNEEN


If you are going to write and post "Erotic" Firefly scenes, at least make the characters believable. This wasn't two Firefly characters having sex, this was a "blow by blow" (HA!)of a porn scene with the words "Mal" and "Inara" stuck in there.

Heavily "Sex-Centric" fanfic has it's place. And, I truly enjoy some of the best Naughtiness out there. This? Not so much.

Try rewriting this with an "In Canon" Mal and Inara.

Wednesday, August 16, 2006 6:33 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...how I feel so split over this:(

Part of me recognizes the fact that is erotic fanfic and that Mal and Inara are rather out of character. However, another part of me wonders "who says they wouldn't get this nasty if they finally broke down and had sex.

I mean....Mal appears a prude and Inara's a Companion. Both parties wouldn't seem to be people who get mucho potty-mouthed or...unbelievably invovled in the acts themselves, rather than the significance behind them. However, as a Devil Advocate for Pelicken's position/work (in name of fairness to a fellow writer and Browncoat), I gotta wonder if they wouldn't get all "F--k me! Yeah! Do it!" with one another, as a result of their repressed emotions towards one another. Since we only have limited evidence of Mal and Inara's sex practices from the series, I would want a tad bit more on-high proof that this kind of NC-17/X action would impossible, even as something that happens "off screen" (aka something to be rerefenced to but not shown, possibly).

Still, as a bit of advice from one writer to another? This kind of Firefly fanfic might be better served at a site like Television Sex Stories Archive (http://www.t-s-s-a.com) or Literotica (http://www.literotica.com/stories). Cuz you can write this kind of story out without getting narked at for being too outside of canon. 'Sides...I know of at least one author who started out doing stuff like Harlequin romances and harder stuff that transitioned to "mainstream" ficiton. I have the same faith something similiar could happen for ya;)

BEB

Thursday, October 19, 2006 2:04 AM

SEAL892


I like it but I think you have a dirty mind


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