BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

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A Deleted Scene from "Shindig"
Friday, August 4, 2006

A new final scene for the episode, with some hot Mal/Inara love. NC-17


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6466    RATING: 4    SERIES: FIREFLY

“Besides,” Inara said, gazing at him with a slight grin. “Why would I want to leave Serenity?” Mal smiled back and mused over the question for a moment. “Can’t think of a reason.”

* * *

Minutes later they stumbled into Inara’s shuttle, kissing passionately. Their tongues intertwined and massaged each other. Mal moved down her face, continuing his kisses down to her neck and started to nibble and suck at the tender spot he found there. He moved the straps of her dress off her shoulders and pulled her breasts out over her bra. Hungrily, he suckled at her pert nipples. They were quarter sized, pink, and perfect. Suddenly, he realized just what he was doing and who he was doing it too. He pulled away and looked up at Inara. “This is crazy.” She met his gaze with lust filled eyes. “I know. Just please don’t stop. I need you Mal.” He continued his ministrations, licking and sucking. “I’ve wanted you for so long Inara.” “Take me Mal.” Hearing her say that banished any doubt he might have had, leaving raw lust for this beautiful woman. Mal pushed her to the wall of her shuttle and fell to his knees in front of her. Running his hands up her sexy legs, he lifted her up her skirt. Filled with passion, he ripped off her panties and lifted her right leg over his shoulder. Licking and kissing along her thigh, he made his way to her glistening slit. He slid two fingers in first, probing and massaging her pussy. Inara rolled her head back and whimpered at his touch. “Oh fuck yes…tianna…oh Mal don’t teased me…” Mal took his fingers out and touched her lips with them. She sucked on his fingers and her own juices greedily. Smiling, he knelt back down and licked at her glistening lips. Caressing her hips, he worked his tongue in and out of her rapidly, then latched onto her clit with his mouth. He nibbled and sucked on the velvet bud of her passion, delighting in her moans. He slid his fingers back into her, curving them to hit her G-spot. Her head was thrashing back and forth and she leaned against the wall for support. She moaned and cooed as he pleasured her. “Oh! Yes! Just like that! Don’t stop…I’m almost there. Don’t stop Mal!” He added another finger to her pussy, and she went over the edge, coating his face with her juices. She leaned against the wall, obviously pleased. She gave him a come hither look, and he rose to kiss her passionately. They stumbled to the edge of Inara’s bed and Mal moved his mouth to her ear. “Turn around,” he whispered. She smiled and did so, turning and bending over the bed. Mal lifted her dress again and undid his pants. He slid his hard cock into her wetness with one hard thrust and they both let out a pleasurable moan. Wasting no time, he began to thrust into her, the sound of skin slapping against skin loud in the shuttle. They moved forward on the bed and Inara started to moan again as he drove her higher and higher. “TIANNA YES!! That’s it Mal! FUCK!” she yelled, her nails raking across the bed sheets. “I love you Inara…oh God you feel good.” “I love you too Mal. You feel so good…oh…don’t stop.” Mal lifted her body up, her back to his chest as he fucked her. She turned her head to face him and their lips met. They kissed deeply, and she licked his tongue as their lips parted. He reached and massaged he clit, sending her over the edge once again. She moaned loudly and her pussy clamped down on his cock as her entire body stiffened. His cock was covered in her juices as she came. After a few more thrusts he came as well, grinding into her as deeply as possible. He released his seed into her and they both collapsed on the bed, cradled in each other’s arms.

COMMENTS

Friday, August 4, 2006 6:04 AM

WANMEI


First off I want to commend you on bouncing back and keeping up writing, even after all the hateful reviews on your previous pieces. It takes a strong person to come back like that!

Now, it isn't perfect, not by any means, but it's improved since your last foray into the fandom. I think it's got enromous potential. Keep it up, keep working with it! Maybe write some Simon/Kaylee smut to please us diehard Silee fans! ;)

Keep up the writing! Practice makes perfect!

Saturday, August 5, 2006 2:13 AM

CAPERCAILLIE


NC-17 !!! You should mark this as pure smut and porn.

Sunday, August 6, 2006 12:33 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Well now...this was certainly a whole lot of "GUH" in one small package;)

Definitely coming along with infusing a more adult spin (even more than it already had, natch) into the 'Verse...but things still seem a tad too porn spoof. Maybe a bit more hesitaiton before the actual action could sell things better....

Still...while some people find smut their anti-bag, I think that this is a good effort in trying to unite to seemingly disparate elements;D

BEB

Wednesday, August 9, 2006 12:24 PM

EMPIREX


An improvement to the previous postings. I think this writer is getting better. Word choice is key.
For example,
<<Running his hands up her sexy legs, he lifted her up her skirt.>>
So Inara has sexy legs. Why are they sexy? Are they long and lithe, etc...? What's so special about Inara's legs that Mal finds them so sexy?
And <<Filled with passion, he ripped off her panties...>>
Put us in Mal's head. What is he thinking? Simply writing that Mal is "filled with passion" doesn't go far enough. Describe this passion!
Good luck and keep writing.

Wednesday, August 9, 2006 5:47 PM

WOLFPOET


i agree with capercaillie.

Tuesday, November 14, 2006 6:28 PM

BROWNCOATCRUSADER


Hugh Hefner would be proud. I must warn you though, not to answer the door if an angry mob of priests make a visit


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