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Precious Cargo
Friday, November 18, 2005

Mal makes several mistakes and gets some unexpected cargo. A 100 word drabble.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1963    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Disclaimer: I do not own Firefly

Precious Cargo by April

His first mistake was not knowing what the cargo was.

His second was not reading that paper before he signed it.

His third was agreeing to wait till nightfall to pick it up

As soon as he saw the cargo he had tried to return the money and get out of it. When that didn’t work Jayne began swinging his gun around. That just made the situation worse.

In the end there was nothing he could do.

That was how he and Jayne ended up walking back to Serenity, three children trailing behind them. On their way to grandmother’s house.

COMMENTS

Friday, November 18, 2005 9:22 PM

JACQUI


Heee!

Serenity and kids. What fun.

Friday, November 18, 2005 10:47 PM

ITSAWASH


Hurray for a great fanfic idea. You KNOW you've gotta go further on this, neh, April? What the heck are you doing chatting with me in the other room? Don't you know you've gotta get this finished for ISwallowedABug? He's waiting! No wait, that'd be me. I'M waiting! LOL.

Saturday, November 19, 2005 7:12 AM

SAMEERTIA


Heh!
Here I was wondering how many mistakes poor Mal could make in 100 words! Guess it just wasn't his day.

Saturday, November 19, 2005 8:14 AM

BELLONA


aaw, c'mon...ya know ya can't just leave us swingin' in the wind!!! more!!!

b

Thursday, November 24, 2005 8:44 AM

JETFLAIR


Too short! This promises to be a very entertaining tale though, keep it up:)

Saturday, April 29, 2006 2:31 AM

SAFEAT2ND


HAHAHA!!

I can just picture Jayne stomping through town with children in tow!

Monday, May 1, 2006 6:19 PM

MCQ


Very nice concept, April. Keep it up!! :)


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