BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

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Saturday, December 23, 2006

River during her captivity


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1785    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

The world around me is a wind storm Spinning and carrying me away Nothing I can do to stop it Doesn't anyone else see it Why is it only me? Dizzy and falling I reach out, For anything A hand grabs me, and I jerk back, scared But it starts to pull me And it starts to feel safe I let it pull I don't see a face Only shadows, saving me The spinning is slowing I can almost step out The hand starts to slip I start to fall back But it grabs on stronger, safer Pulling quick, I'm out. The sun is bright, blinding me Smilling and feeling whole Nothing but love and happiness fills me I step up to my saviour And lean in A kiss for the one who saved me But as my lips are about to touch The sun becomes brighter, painful And the hand lets go. I stumble, And realize I wasn't as close as I thought. And I fall.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, December 27, 2006 8:33 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Wow...definitely A-1 quality poetic goodness, CostumeCat:D

BEB


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