BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

HUMBUG

Total satisfaction
Friday, July 21, 2006

Wriiten for the 25_foods Live Journal community. Prompt 02 from Table 1: Chocolate Syrup. Jayne takes Kaylee and a bottle of chocolate sauce to their bunk. Lotsa Sexy Fun.


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Title: Total Satisfaction Author: Humbug Character/Pairing: Firefly: Jayne/Kaylee Disclaimer: Joss is Boss. I’m just borrowing his characters for fun!! Prompt Table: 1 Prompt: 002. Chocolate Syrup* Rating: NC-17/R Warnings: Full of Jaylee sexiness. Some cursing in Mandarin (with English translations). Word Count: 637 Author’s Notes: Jayne takes Kaylee back to their bunk for more hi-jinks.

I just took this idea and ran with it... I think you know where I'm going... He, he!! ;D

Prompt table 1 from 25_foods Live Journal community.

************************* bao-bei = darling Ai ya! = Damn! tian tang = paradise/ heaven *************************

Jayne laid Kaylee down gently on the bed, pressing soft, passionate kisses to her mouth. She sighed, settling into his warm embrace.

His large hands smoothed their way from her hair, down her back, up and under her top, to caress the creamy skin beneath.

“Jayne!” she moaned.

“Yes, bao-bei, what can I do for ya?” Jayne asked.

“Don’t stop,” she sighed.

He grinned. “Not plannin’ to,” was all he said, slipping her top over her head, revealing deliciously rounded breasts.

Growling, he bent his head to gently graze the tender skin with his stubbled cheek, and then soothe it with his soft, warm lips.

Kaylee eased his t-shirt up off his firm torso, planting kisses across every inch of bare skin she found.

Jayne pulled back to reach for the bottle of chocolate sauce.

“Now what’cha plan ta do with that?” Kaylee teased.

“Just lay back and close ya eyes,” Jayne answered with a grin.

So Kaylee settled back, gasping as she felt something cold on her bare torso. She squirmed and giggled as she felt it run across her breasts, beginning to spread down her ribs.

She gasped as she felt his firm tongue begin to lick and suck the gooey substance from her skin. He took his time around the undersides of each breast, and across the darker skin of her nipples, enjoying her sighs and groans in response. He ended up plunging his tongue into her belly button to get the last of the chocolate sauce from her creamy skin.

Then he travelled lower, easing her panties from her hips, plunging his talented tongue into her core, sucking and teasing her there until she cried out, “Jayne!”

Kaylee sighed in satisfaction, and Jayne held her as her breath slowed, ‘till she calmed down.

With a grin, she sat up and said, “Right, now it’s my turn.”

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Jayne laid back and closed his eyes, enjoying the final moments of expectation before his woman took him to heaven and back.

He felt the sauce run between the muscles across his chest and stomach, just before she began licking and sucking it from his bare skin.

She straddled his hips, and he felt her panties press against his hardening member.

Ai ya! He wanted her to take off his pants and run some of that sauce across his John Thomas.

She took her time, licking every drop of chocolate sauce from every curve of every muscle, enjoying the laughs that shook his body when she tickled, as well as the tremors that shook when she teased his skin.

Kaylee was seducing her man with every drop, every lick and every kiss.

“Ya want it anywhere else?” she yeased.

“Hell, yes!” was Jayne’s eager reply.

She waved the bottle of chocolate sauce in anticipation of his answer.

He glanced down to where she was straddling his hips.

“Oh?” she purred, “Ya want the doctor ta give you a thorough checkin’ over?”

All Jayne could do was nod.

She lifted herself up on her knees with a grin of anticipation. She loosened his pants, and he shucked himself out of them, provocatively rubbing against her panties, still perched above him.

Jayne groaned as she poured the sauce, and also put a little in her mouth. He shivered as she lowered her head and began to lick and suck him clean.

He was out of breath by the time she lifted her head, grinning at him.

She laid her head on his chest as he caught his breath.

She could feel the residue of chocolate on his skin. “Ugh! So sticky”, she grinned, “Think we’ll have ta have a shower ta get really clean again.”

Jayne closed his eyes and tried to slow down his breathing. He was in tian tang, but his woman was goin’ to be the death of him.

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COMMENTS

Saturday, July 22, 2006 6:46 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...my...lord...you've gone and broke my mind, Humbug! Hell...this probably isn't me, but my other personality running the show;)

Ya know...there's "hot" and then there's "Hot!" but this? This is "H-O-T!"

BEB

Monday, July 24, 2006 11:59 PM

HUMBUG


*blushes* It started getting steamy, and longer, but I just ran with it. Gald it worked.

I started with the starwberries, and wanted to move straight onto choc sauce, but liked the idea of ice cream sundaes, so wrote that and led up to the choc sauce in their bunk....

I don't know where it all comes from?!! Honest...


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