BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

THECOWBOYFROMHELL

Sweet surrendering Pt5: I Only Want You
Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Kaylee and Inara enjouy a sweet and sexy get away. this is so not for kids, and has some mushy woman to woman love making, so you are all warned.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2140    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Disclaimer time: I didn’t come up with the lovely characters, I just get to spend some quality time with them when my love life is lacking. They all belong to Joss and his ‘Mutant Enemy’ company.

Also once again, just to hammer it in: This is not for kids! I don’t care how advanced you think you are…you saw the warning!

Now thank yous: Washie, hun as always your shiny aura of awesomeness has had its profound effects, once again, in helping me with my story. Josh Holme and the rest of the guys from the Eagles of Death Metal must be thanked for the title. On to our story:

I Only Want You

Time seemed to contract when Kaylee had returned to Inara’s shuttle the night before they had arrived on Persephone. It all seemed like a dream run in fast motion; Inara felt almost drunk. The last four days time had refused to run at a normal pace; Inara was certain that if it weren’t for Kaylee standing next to her with her arm around her waist she would be much more bothered. Instead all she had to be bothered about was when the woman who managed the small bed and breakfast would stop eyeing them suspiciously, and tell them where there room was. Inara sighed, wondering if Kaylee was feeling as impatient as she. It was almost torture, just how much she wanted to get into their room with her lovely lover and enjoy the short time they had together.

Kaylee, while smiling and nodding at what the manager was saying, squeezed Inara in reassuringly. The manager turned to get their room key and disappeared into a small back office briefly, long enough for Kaylee to press her lips to Inara’s ear and whisper; “Shh…not long now bao bai…then you're mine.” Kaylee’s tongue slid quickly up the outer ridges of Inara’s sensitive ear, causing the companion to moan quietly as the manager returned. The look on her face was priceless, Inara thought; it was a mix of ‘Oh that’s what it was about these two,’ and, ‘Well, you would hope they would be more subtle about it.’ Inara stifled a grin and thanked the woman while picking up the key.

“Breakfast is usually held in the dining room at ten…though if you would prefer to eat in your room you're most welcome too.” “Thank you…” Inara turned to Kaylee who nodded, smiling somewhat impishly. “I think that may be best.” “Then when you wish to eat just use the intercom. Any other meals can be received this way as well. Anything you would like us to help you with while you stay here on Persephone, you're most welcome to ask. We may be a small house but we can arrange day trips and tours if you like,” the woman breathed.

“Thank you but I think we will be fine.” Inara tried not to imply what was no doubt obvious about their stay, but it was no use, it was as blatant as Jayne’s tact with women. Inara knew her tailored tone could only cover up so much when she was in this mood. “We will…inquire if the need arises. The room is all ready?” “Yes, it is up those stairs and then at the far end of the hall, you can't miss it.” The woman smiled at the two lovers for the first time since they had arrived; it portrayed how much she understood their need for a place like hers, and how little she was likely to bother them. Inara and Kaylee both smiled, then turned, picked up their belongings and walked briskly up the stairs.

Inara felt the heavy cool oak door slam as her semi-bare back collided with it in a flurry of Kaylee shaped movement. Kaylee forced her lips against Inara’s, pressed her tongue into the older woman’s mouth, prying her teeth apart with little resistance. Kaylee’s tongue, hot and wet, slid into Inara’s mouth.

Inara stopped thinking, and everything became quiet.

Kaylee’s strawberry perfume filled Inara’s nose, her senses consumed but the feel, taste and smell of the other woman. Inara felt her arms close about her sweet lover pulling her closer, her hand cupping the base of Kaylee’s head, encouraging her deeper into the kiss.

The companion felt the kiss deepen as warm soft hands slid about her waist, one slipping lower, cupping the flesh that lay beneath the elegant dress. Inara moaned loudly, feeling a squeeze, their kiss getting noisier by the minute, her need growing, her body burning. Inara felt like the light dress she had chosen to wear was becoming too confining, too stifling, the heat in her body rising, growing.

Inara felt her hands roam Kaylee’s back, little more than instinct and need driving her. She wanted to feel Kaylee, touch all of her body, she wanted to get closer to her being and she almost couldn’t bear the wait. Kaylee pulled back slowly, breath filling both their lungs. Inara exhaled slowly, never taking her eyes from Kaylee.

“I’ve wanted this for so long ‘Nara.” Kaylee said in an almost breathless way, like it took a concerted bodily effort to utter the sentence. “I know bao bai…” Inara trailed off not knowing how to respond in words. She pulled Kaylee to her, holding her tightly, kissing her on the cheek, then moving down her jaw to the crook of her neck. The kisses were light and playful, but as swiftly as Inara’s need for Kaylee increased they became deeper, wetter. Kaylee moaned loudly, feeling Inara’s hot wet tongue play over her sensitive neck, hearing the little noises as Inara inhaled, moistened her lips or changed the direction of her assault on Kaylee’s neck.

Inara felt Kaylee tighten her hold around her waist, one skilled hand seeking out the soft warm skin about her lover’s neck and shoulders, moving slowly, lasciviously to the simple fastening at the base of Inara’s neck. She tugged on it gently feeling Inara pulling back, Kaylee looked up at Inara’s smiling face.

“You really have been holding this back for a while.” There was no malice in what Inara said, just velvet seduction. She wanted to undress for Kaylee. She had wanted this so strongly deep down for so long. Kaylee made motion to help Inara out of the garment, but the companion motioned for Kaylee to stand back.

Kaylee gasped. Never in all her life had she borne witness to such a sensuous display of un-robing. Inara had turned it into an art form, like an exotic belly dance, as she slowly slipped the straps from her lightly bronzed shoulders. The fabric seemed to slide off Inara’s body slowly, like mercury under water, it was dazzling. Kaylee thought perhaps it was like watching a beautiful flower open to the first rays of morning sun.

The dress slid graciously to the floor and Kaylee gasped as Inara stood there in all her womanly glory. The soft light peeking through the window highlighted the curves and contours of her shoulders, neck, hips and breasts. Inara stood there smiling, appreciating how awed Kaylee was. Kaylee suddenly felt very hot and considerably more flustered than she had in the moments of heated kissing and holding. She felt her body ache, her need to touch the goddess-like form Inara struck in her nudity.

Faster than if she had had to pull a crazy Ivan, Kaylee laid waste to her simple blue shirt and olive drab three quarter length pants. She tentatively moved toward Inara, her hand having a need to reach out and see if the other woman was real, not just some ethereal apparition.

It struck her as odd that out of all the things she noticed, it was the little things that stuck with her the most. The little upturn of Inara’s lips, the small goose bumps that appeared on her lover's skin as she got closer. Kaylee became mesmerized by the rise and fall of Inara’s breasts as she breathed in and out, anticipating Kaylee’s touch. Inara exhaled slowly as Kaylee’s hand slid up her out-stretched arm, slowly sliding up to her shoulder, over her collarbone and up her neck. Inara closed her eyes wanting only too feel the other woman touch her; she felt Kaylee’s hand cup the base of her neck, her warm fingers splaying out over Inara’s shoulder’s, pulling her gently toward Kaylee.

Inara felt light kisses being placed ever so carefully over her collarbone, up her neck. The companion felt fingers caress her shoulder, slipping slowly down her torso, grazing sensitive flesh, till finally coming to rest under her left breast. Inara gasped, her eyes closed so tightly, lost in her need to be touched.

Kaylee’s mouth came hot and wet to the companion's earlobe then to her ear. “Be mine tonight ‘Nara Serra…all mine…” Inara’s body convulsed, her stomach clenched, her sex ached and she squeezed her thighs together for fear of how little control she would have if she didn’t.

“Y…Yes.” The companion hissed as Kaylee lavished her tongue on her ear and cupped her left breast in her firm but not rough right hand. Kaylee’s hot mouth pressed against her temple, then she pulled back, forcing Inara to open her eyes, a needy expression playing out over her whole body.

“Come to bed, bao bai…” Kaylee’s voice breathy and lustful. Inara knew it would have taken a veritable act of god, or some other such divine power to stop her from complying. She was Kaylee’s tonight…and she loved it. In the brief moments before Inara was guided softly to the expansive bed, Kaylee whipped off her bra to expose her pert succulent breasts. Inara felt the hunger, the need to feel, taste and smell Kaylee near her, to explore her curves; her lovely round buttocks, her chest and stomach.

Time once again seemed to dilate for Inara. One moment she was touching Kaylee’s shoulder, the next she felt herself reclining onto the bed, Kaylee’s sweet body mere inches away from her own. She could smell Kaylee now, her scent of strawberries mixed with a heady dose of Kaylee’s own musk. Inara could almost taste it, wanted to taste it.

Their two bodies pressed together as Kaylee playfully forced herself into Inara’s mouth again, pressing her warm thigh into Inara’s burning centre. Inara moaned into Kaylee’s mouth, causing the younger woman to press against her more, intertwining her free hand in the long lustrous dark hair of the goddess-like companion. Inara was lost in the moment, Kaylee kissing her neck, her hand cupping Inara’s own chin, her own hand cupping Kaylee’s firm supple buttock, curling her long fingers under the elastic of the simple cotton panties and brushing the warm skin. In a flurry of quick motion Kaylee shed the offending garment, creating a cloud of warm Kaylee scent.

Inara drank in her lover's smell, her hand seeking out her warm folds, prying between their two bodies. Kaylee shifted, to attain a better vantage on Inara’s mouth, feeling the other woman’s long expert fingers seek out her burning centre. Inara felt Kaylee cock her leg just as hot warm wetness connected with her fingers. Kaylee moaned, low and lustfully, Inara’s finger grazing her slick folds nestled just under a patch of warm curls. Inara’s fingers sought deeper, parting delete the her love's lips, as she was pressing hers against the other woman, her fingers probing the warmth and soft flesh, her palm resting against Kaylee’s burning clitoris. The younger woman started grinding against Inara’s hand, pressing her hips and stomach closer, more of her wetness escaping her.

Kaylee clenched, her body writhing against the companion's touch, feeling her depths being probed, fingers finding her most sensitive parts. Kaylee knew she was not far from spent, feeling her centre give up more and more of its sacred nectar, forcing herself to peel away from her lover's beautiful face with a saddened moan.

Kaylee shivered at this, then slowly began Persephone’s descent to the netherworld. It was tender and methodical, slow, soft kisses down Inara’s neck, then on to her collarbone. Inara undulated under Kaylee’s tender touches, moaning, feeling Kaylee’s soft and moist tongue skirt her nipple, now hard under the onslaught of arousal. The darker woman brought her now free hand to her lips, smelling and tasting Kaylee’s sweet love seed, preening her hand in between her uncontrollable writhing.

Inara was being consumed by burning passion, she’d definitely enjoyed her time with her clients, but this was heaven. This was the most intense love making she had ever experienced.

Kaylee’s hand trailed down Inara’s side, over her right breast, over her stomach to just above her hourglass-like hips. Kaylee’s tongue skirted over the skin above the darker woman’s belly button, causing a sharp intake in her breath.

“Yee Soo…” she exhaled. “Shhh…. Save the noises for the really fun part.” Kaylee chuckled from somewhere just above Inara’s naval.

The companion didn’t get a chance to respond as Kaylee trailed her tongue right down Inara’s abdomen, gliding past her deep black curls, moving down her toned inner thigh. The companion thrust her legs apart, as Kaylee insisted on paying attention to the soft skin just to the side of her wanting core. Kaylee teased the other woman by resting her hand spread out just above her lover's sensitive apex, her tongue going everywhere but where the other woman most desired it.

“Kay…ahhhhhh…!”

Kaylee’s tongue lunged into Inara’s dripping centre, her thumb caressing the apex of the other woman’s body. Inara arched, her body writhing, Kaylee lapping, probing her depths. Inara slid her hand down to Kaylee’s free hand and slipped her fingers in between the younger woman’s own, squeezing tightly as Kaylee continued her deep and lustful exploration of Inara’s body. Kaylee’s tongue traced the outline of the darker, moister skin of Inara’s sweet channel, slowly up one side pausing to kiss and suck briefly on her clitoris, only to plunge her tongue deeper into the moist cavern. Kaylee changed tack pressing her fingers deeply, resting her head on her love's thigh so she could lazily suck on Inara’s clitoris, her fingers seeking the companion’s most sensitive flesh. All the while Inara did her best to attempt to wriggle free, but stay in the same place the whole time, her walls clenching, her wetness exceeding critical levels and noises that could only mean pleasure escaping from her body.

She tried to think. All she could come up with was ‘where is my mind’. Her brain had given out, her mind had quit for the day. All Inara had was the angelic touch of her Kaylee, and the approach of a truly epic climax.

“Haa-!“ Inara couldn’t keep the sound up, her voice cut out, she could only exhale as her body convulsed. Her core exploded, she saw nothing but white holy light and felt nothing but pure pleasure course through her veins. Her womanhood ached, squeezing the insistent fingers of her love, expelling her arousal and love seed noisily.

Somehow Kaylee had managed to slip her hand free from Inara’s crushing hold, sliding it under her back, while pulling her head up to the level of Inara’s breast, fastening her lips to an erect nipple. Inara’s body bucked her pleasure so full and consuming she felt that eternity passed in a moment. Kaylee slowly let Inara down making sure her love could completely ride the lightning.

Inara collapsed, her body sweaty, musky and smelling of her arousal. She was spent, her eyes closed tightly as her body ushered out the last sparks of the divine. Kaylee curled around her, rolling her into her arms, cradling Inara’s head to her breast.

Inara lay panting, eyes closed, her head being stroked softly. She curled into Kaylee’s protective hold wanting to say so much, but failing to grasp the words to express it.

“Ye Soo…” “Shhh…you're supposed to be mine tonight.” Kaylee cooed, pulling a sheet over them both. Inara snuggled deeper into Kaylee’s homely nook, her head resting on the mechanic's lovely chest. She stroked Kaylee’s side feeling lost in the arms of sleep. “Mmm…only if you promise to be mine tomorrow…” “Mmmm…we’ll see bao bai…” Kaylee kissed Inara’s head. “We got three whole days sweetie…” Kaylee yawned, feeling a nap approaching soon too. “We got plenty of time…” Kaylee looked down with heavily lidded eyes at the serene face of an exhausted Inara. Yes, they definitely had plenty of time…

COMMENTS

Wednesday, July 19, 2006 4:22 AM

ITSAWASH


So Cowboy. DUDE! You write the Inara/Kaylee as good as Jayne shoots a gun, Babe. One of the best things about how you played out this fic chapter is your having Kaylee administer the loving for the most part. A lovely twist, seein' as how her partner for the night is a companion. You made Kaylee teach the Guild Sister a thing or two, and me as well! Sigh. This thing made me miss my man something AWFUL, which was a pre-existing condition for me anyhow but was made more anxious after I read this gem from you.

Keep writing. I'm loving it. And can hardly wait to see what 'Nara does to upstage that Kayleefyin' hotness I read of yours.

Great lines abound, but here's a couple of my faves:"Faster than if she had had to pull a crazy Ivan, Kaylee laid waste to her simple blue shirt and olive drab three quarter length pants. She tentatively moved toward Inara, her hand having a need to reach out and see if the other woman was real, not just some ethereal apparition. " and--- "....creating a cloud of warm Kaylee scent." Sigh. Cowboy, this is GOODNESS!

Thursday, July 20, 2006 1:10 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


*Inara tried not to imply what was no doubt obvious about their stay, but it was no use, it was as blatant as Jayne’s tact with women.*
-BWAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!!

Inara undressing for Kaylee = GUH!

*Faster than if she had had to pull a crazy Ivan, Kaylee laid waste to her simple blue shirt and olive drab three quarter length pants.*
-BWAHAHAHAHA !!!! #2

*her stomach clenched, her sex ached and she*
-I do feel compelled to mention my complete distaste for using the word sex in this manner, but it doesn't affect my enjoyment of your fic in the least

*In a flurry of quick motion Kaylee shed the offending garment, creating a cloud of warm Kaylee scent.*
-GUH! #2

Very very very good slash fic Cowboy, you need to keep 'em coming as fast as you can (school work, song writing, and social life notwithstanding, of course).

Thursday, July 20, 2006 3:33 AM

FLYWITHMECAPTN


OK, OK, This Calls for a "When Harry met Sally" moment

YES, YES, YES, YES,....LOL

Very good cowboy....I must say indeed....makes me miss my man a little also washie......

*making sure her love could completely ride the lightning*

Thursday, July 20, 2006 3:49 AM

FLYWITHMECAPTN


Hope you enjoyed the "Thesaurus"
references in the past comments......

Thursday, July 20, 2006 4:22 AM

COSMICFUGITIVE


WHOAH! Damn, that was good. Really good!

This story was dripping with so much goodness. I'm really not sure where to start. O.o I need a second to breath. :)

There were lots of great touches and lines that everyone's already mentioned. The interaction with the manager springs to mind, and Inara's undressing scene too.

I liked the way this part was written:

*Inara lay panting, eyes closed, her head being stroked softly. She curled into Kaylee’s protective hold wanting to say so much, but failing to grasp the words to express it.*

It was just a nice (and even vulnerable) moment. I felt that I was totally inside Inara's head.

Also, I chuckled at this part:

*“Shhh…. Save the noises for the really fun part.” Kaylee chuckled from somewhere just above Inara’s naval.*

This story was sexy, playful and completely in character.

It was conveyed in a mature fashion too. This had a lot of heart, and real emotion in it. I loved it!

- Cos.

Thursday, July 20, 2006 8:37 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...my...gentle...Jesus...this was HOT!

Cowboy...I salute thee and turn a deep shade of green in envy, cuz you have definitely taken Kaynara loving to a whole new level! I really can't wait to see how you top this chapter with Inara's response to this moment of pure intimacy from Kaylee:D

BEB


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