BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

KAYLEE86

Hide and seek
Monday, March 6, 2006


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2030    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Hiding and seek. River is hiding from Simon because he wants to try some new drugs on River.

“River, where are you, Zoe have you seeing River. Said Simon.”

“No, I having see River maybe, she’s with Kaylee on the engine room I hear Kaylee saying something about at River want to learn something’s about engines. Said Zoe.”

“Okay, I will trey in the engine room. Thanks Zoe.”

“You are welcome. Simon.”

After a moment Simon is in the engine room to Kaylee.

“Hey Kaylee. Is River with you?”

“No, what do you need her for.”

“She has get her shots.”

“Oh, have you seen in the bridge with or in the commune room with Inara.”

“No I’ve, so go and see Simon.”

“Thank Kaylee. See you later” ~~~*~~~~

At the same time River with Mal... River skips into the bridge where she finds Mal alone. “Hey Mal” she sit in the vacant chair. “Hey River, having’ fun?” Mal asks “Avoiding Simon.” River scowls. “More shots?” Mal asked. “Ya, I does’ want to have more now for the moment or for the day. They make my head go nuts. From the drugs Simon give me. This morning.” “That’s not so good. Can I help with some thing?” “Yes you can will you make Simon go away until tonight, please please Mal.” “Sure Darling”

“Thank, Cap’ in Daddy”

“See you later at dinner.”

“See’ ya.”

COMMENTS

Tuesday, March 7, 2006 2:24 AM

STARRBABY


I'm assuming that english is your second language as you're from Denmark. I'm impressed with your skills, and you do much better with english than I do with any other language.(I stumble through a few) However, you make a few gramatical errors. Would you like a Beta? (That's someone who proof-reads your work before you post it)

Tuesday, March 7, 2006 3:37 AM

KAYLEE86


I would like very much thank you. my mail is gilmoregirls27@hotmail.cpm

Tuesday, March 7, 2006 3:37 AM

KAYLEE86


I would like very much thank you.
My mail is gilmoregirls27@hotmail.com or linettekayriver@yahoo.ca


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