BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

THEREALPARADISO

New Beginnings
Saturday, January 14, 2006

Very postBDM, Mal goes to a friend's funeral, and two people are reunited again.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1983    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Disclaimer: Mal & Co. are not mine, just borrowed, all characters not present in Firefly/Serenity were created by me.

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It was a sunny morning when the wave came, the one that would cause Mal to gather his scattered crew together once more. The sunlight poured through the window as he sent waves of his own, mocking him with its joy and light. There was nothing joyful or light about today.

They gathered together on the grass, standing in the shade of the trees. They listened as the preacher said his words, watched as the ritual was completed. A man stepped forward and dropped a rose on the ground, his little daughter crying too hard to do so herself.

Afterwards, Mal stood alone. He watched the area they’d been standing in before, knowing that the last of his soul would forever lay there. The man who had dropped the rose came up to him and spoke.

“Thank you for coming,” he said. “You thought I wouldn’t?” Mal asked without turning. “Never crossed my mind. But thanks,” the man hesitated. “It’s strange, you know, I feel like I should be sadder, grieve more, but all I can think is that they’re together again and it’s all she ever wanted.”

The two men stood in silence.

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Zoe stood by the grave, staring down at the rose, completely and utterly lost as to what she should do next.

“Missed talkin’ to you, Lambie Toes,” came a voice from behind her. “Missed listening, Husband,” came the response.

Wash came up behind his wife and hugged her tightly. She closed her eyes and leaned into his embrace.

“Want to stay a little longer?” he asked. Zoe gave the rose one last look. “No. We can go.” “Good,” said Wash, putting his arm around Zoe’s shoulders as they walked away. “We’ve got some catching up to do.”

Wash reached into his pocket and pulled out a small notebook. He flipped it open and began to read the first page to himself.

“You kept a list?” Zoe asked, eyeing her husband. “Well, didn’t want to forget anything,” Wash said absentmindly as he scanned the page. Suddenly, he dropped his arm from Zoe’s shoulders and hit her in the back of the head.

“Hey!” Zoe yelled, moving away from Wash. “What was that for?” “Your little suicide rampage! Do you have any idea how much more horrible the whole Oh-My-God-I’m-Dead moment is when you’re watching your wife…” Wash trailed off as they walked past Mal and his companion. They both stopped for a moment and looked at the men.

“You did good, Zoe,” Wash said softly, kissing her temple. “Best son a man could hope for.” “We did good,” Zoe answered as she reached up to wipe the tear from her son’s face, pulling her hand away at the last second. “I hate to leave him.” “I know,” Wash said. “But it’s time.”

With that, Wash put his arm around his wife once more and they continued their walk, disappearing into the dusk.

COMMENTS

Sunday, January 15, 2006 12:04 AM

AMDOBELL


This was beautifully written and so sad. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Sunday, January 15, 2006 9:24 AM

LVS2READ


Very nice! Poignant without being heartbreaking. Liked how you kept us wondering til the end who the other man was. Well done!

"I love my captain."

Sunday, January 15, 2006 3:42 PM

NYKEGYRL


Good!! Made me squall like a little baby!!

Sunday, January 15, 2006 3:48 PM

CAPNZOE


*sniff sniff*

I loved it.

Monday, January 16, 2006 7:16 AM

GUENEVER


I totally agree with Capnzoe. "Sniff, Sniff."

Monday, January 16, 2006 8:52 AM

BELLONA


that's really beautiful. i could see wash and zoe wandering off into the afterlife together...and him skelping her upside the head for going all psycho woman.

b

Thursday, February 2, 2006 2:18 PM

OBSIDIANAGIRL


*SNIFF*

I think this was wonderful! I am just so touched by the idea of it.

Love...LOVE, LOVE! Wash hitting her on the back of the head...was awesome...really great...Thanks for sharing.

SID

Wednesday, April 12, 2006 10:54 PM

CAB1729


Perfect length, perfect tone. Yes, I had tears in my eyes, still get 'em when I think about the list and the slap upside the head. Write more! Now!

cabri :)

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 7:36 AM

SOFI


agh! this is sooooo sad and yet so cute and so ... awww =( love your writing!

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 11:09 PM

LUCASHARPER


Great, great stuff.

Gotta say I never thought of that angle before and I dunno why...


Luc


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