BLUE SUN ROOM IMAGES

KIRSTIE

Building better worlds
Wednesday, December 28, 2005

Hi everyone! This is my second attempt at a wallpaper, I hope you like it. Again all comments and criticisms welcome!


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COMMENTS

Wednesday, December 28, 2005 7:55 AM

CAUSAL


This is great! I wish I'd thought of it. Three suggestions:

For the four images along the left hand side: 1) consider moving them to the right hand side (since they'll be obscured by icons); 2) consider pulling out a bit (they're so close in that it's not readily apparent what we're seeing, particularly on the bottom one.

3) I think it'd be funny if this was some kind of splash ad for the Alliance. Imagine it with the Alliance flag in one of the corners; the text could read: "The Allied Goverment--Building Better Worlds" or somesuch.

Great work, overall!

Wednesday, December 28, 2005 7:56 AM

CAUSAL


Oh, one more thing--might not want to have the text directly over Earth-That-Was. That seems to send the wrong message (maybe substitute some shiny present-day earth).

Wednesday, December 28, 2005 8:53 AM

KIRSTIE


Thanks Causal!!

I am going to remake the wallpaper (this was my first go!) so thank you so much for your suggestions - I will put them in when I remake it!

Thanks again :)

Wednesday, December 28, 2005 1:26 PM

CAUSAL


:) You're welcome!

Wednesday, December 28, 2005 1:59 PM

BELLONA


*giggle* now all i can picture is an ad for the alliance running across a banner...

b


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