BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

KAYLEERULESALL

Rising Smoke
Friday, September 2, 2005

Doing what one has to do will sometimes change that person forever.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2036    RATING: 10    SERIES: FIREFLY

Summary: Someone does something unexpected. Short little fic; first one posted on this site from me. Basically a single scene I have had bouncing around in my head for a few days.

I don’t own any of these characters. I don’t own anything, actually.

Rated PG-13 just to be safe.

Rising Smoke

The deafening report of a gun rang out; Mal slightly jumped as he prepared for the searing pain that would accompany the bullet entering his body. Nothing happened; silence hung thick on the air. No pain. He let one eye slowly open. Jubel Early stood before him, still. Silent. Mal opened the other eye; Early just stood there, staring off into space, gun still pointed at Mal’s stomach. Then his body tilted, and he fell, almost in slow motion, crumbling like a cheap paper doll. The thud of his lifeless body hitting the deck plating reverberated in the funerary atmosphere of the bridge. Lowering his hands, Mal stared at the figure standing behind the corpse; the person responsible for saving his life by ending Early’s. Incomprehension and shock soon grew in the captain’s chest; his stare was met by the scared yet strong gaze of his savior. She stared back at him, disbelief and shock coursing through her veins as she realized what she had just done. The gun still clasped in her hand, smoke rising from the barrel and clouding up the air between her and Mal. His face changed from one of disbelief to concern; a look that suited him well, but he seldom wore. His gaze shifted; routing through Early’s armor, he retrieved his gun, holstered it. She held onto hers, knuckles white. Still staring ahead, tiny shivers running along her spine. “Mei mei, he’s dead, you can lower the gun now.” Compassion rang through his voice. She heard him. Her hand relaxed; the sound of metal slamming into metal assaulted their ears. A single tear fell from her eye; he pulled her close. His shirt was soon stained with salt water. Her small body shook with sobs. He uttered reassuring words, noises. He held her close. She released everything. Not just what had happened just now, but everything. All the pain and terror she had held bottled up since the first day she had met Jubel Early, in Serenity’s engine room…

COMMENTS

Friday, September 2, 2005 8:58 PM

KAYLEERULESALL


yeah, this was written in about 10 minutes at 2 in the morning; probably not my best work, but i wanted to get something in the blue sun room, and this was an idea ive had for a while. i might actually make a real story out of it, if yall are interested.

Friday, September 2, 2005 9:54 PM

STARRBABY


That was so awsome. I loved it! It was so visual, and I could see it all happening.

Saturday, September 3, 2005 1:29 AM

AMDOBELL


I loved this, especially as it was not only a case of Jubal getting his just deserts but cathartic for Kaylee. I wish this had happened on the show though the way it ended with Early spinning out into space was cool too. As the saying goes, no one really ever dies in science fiction which leaves a nice little loophole for the villain to come back. This was excellent, perfection in a nutshell and very shiny. Hope you write more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Saturday, September 3, 2005 2:23 AM

BELLONA


ooh, yes please! VERY interested!!!

Saturday, September 3, 2005 8:06 AM

RINNYPJ


Hmmm, go Kaylee! I'm so proud of her. That was excellent. And I love that you told it more from Mal's point of view than Kaylee's. Fantastic.

Saturday, September 3, 2005 5:06 PM

KAYLEERULESALL


wow, guys, thanks for the praise! you can definately expect a story from this now, expect it in a couple of weeks!

Saturday, September 3, 2005 5:14 PM

KAYLEERULESALL


Actually, screw that. ill do it in chapters; that way ill have a chap up every 1 to 3 days. hows that sound?

Tuesday, September 6, 2005 2:30 AM

FREDIKAYLLOW


That was fantastic!!!! Never underestimate your late night writing capabilities, thats always when i write, and it when all my best stuff comes out!!!

No Power In The Verse
XOXOX-FREDIKAYLLOW-XOXOX


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