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WHITEKNIGHT

The "Good" Book: part two
Saturday, August 28, 2004

My death in text.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1714    RATING: 6    SERIES: FIREFLY

The “Good” Book: Part two. NC-17 PORN!!!!!! Written by: WhiteKnight. At no point did I get any money, candy, or small children for this story. I also yield to the fact that these characters are not mine and belong to the person/people that created them.

Jayne wasn’t sure if it had been Kaylee or not. It looked like her, but why would she only be partly dressed and coming out of the Shepard’s room? It wasn’t until she had gone back into her room that Jayne was sure of what he had seen. While that concept took some time to digest, the thought of getting something out of the deal did not. “I could make a fortune,” Jayne thought. Jayne was still smiling from ear to ear at the thought of making some kind profit as he slid down the stairs into the Shepard’s room, roughly fifteen minutes after Kaylee had left. Book, was still naked and appeared to be trying to drown his “sorrows” in his Bible. “Yo Shepard, we gott’a talk,” Jayne announced as he stood by the bed. Quickly wrapping himself up in his sheet, “What can I do for you,” Book, asked. “Well, it seems to me that we got some business to discuss… what with Kaylee hav’n left the room and all.” “Wha… what do you mean,” Book, asked as he turned slightly white. “Well, I’m thinking you’re gonna give me some money to keep my mouth shut, Preacher.” “I don’t have any money,” Book replied nervously. “Food then.” “It’s all in the kitchen, you could just go up there and get it,” he replied. “Well, gorramit, what do you have then,” Jayne asked now frustrated.

Without missing a beat, Book slipped to the floor, the sheet slipping from his still moist brownish body, and fluidly unzipped and took Jayne’s soft member into his mouth. Nursing it as a baby nurses its mother’s nipple. Still in a state of shock, all Jayne could do was look down and watch as the white puff of hair disappeared and reappeared from view. As much as Jayne didn’t want to get excited, he couldn’t help what his body was doing. “Gorramit, that feels good,” Jayne, thought. Book’s head, Jayne noticed, had moved back now that he was at full length. What shocked him, though, was that it didn’t matter, the Shepard was still able to take him all into his mouth… all the way to the base. Much to Jayne’s utter surprise, his testicles were being rubbed by the Shepard’s tongue. Hearing a loud slurping sound, a sudden cold rushed over his throbbing and bobbing manhood. The feeling was short lived however, before Jayne could fully understand what he was seeing, the Shepard bent over at the waist and, stepping back, Jayne was being forced to push slowly into Book. “What the hell ya doing,” Jayne asked as he bottomed out. “Making sure you keep your mouth closed,” Book replied as he started to rock back and forth. “I ain’t like that,” Jayne stated firmly as he started to back up only to bump against the wall. “You ran out of room, so it looks like you’re going to the hole with nothing but soul,” Book replied with a smile, as he continued to rock back and forth at a quickening pace. Pushing hard back against Jayne and the wall, Book could feel that Jayne wasn’t long for this world. Reaching back, tugging, and stroking his balls with a free hand Book braced himself for what he knew was coming -- a relentless assault. What he got was far beyond anything that he could have expected. At some point during the festivities, Jayne had removed his belt, which was suddenly put around the Shepard’s neck and pulled tight, almost pulling him off the ground. A rough hand was placed on his hip, and now both were pulling him back as Jayne rammed into him with reckless abandonment. The pace became harder and faster. The belt got tighter around Book’s neck. Finally, there was only darkness. When the Shepard woke up, the room was empty and the belt, along with Jayne, had vanished. The only evidence that he was there was safely stored away in a place that nobody would look. As Book started to get up, he was startled to find a note nearby, a note that said, “Shepard, I’ll keep my mouth shut, but only because nobody would believe what happened.” Jayne.”

COMMENTS

Saturday, August 28, 2004 11:58 AM

WILDHEAVENFARM


Oh no, not you again! And this...this...words fail me. In fact, I think my eyes are starting to fail me. Yup. Now you've done it. Your story triggered hysterical blindness.

Saturday, August 28, 2004 7:56 PM

GUILDSISTER


It's spelled "Shepherd"--"Shepard" is a proper name spelling, ala the astronaut (which actually does have a certain level of appropriateness for a space-faring shepherd).

Ha! How's that for a totally-avoiding-the-point-of-the-story review? ;-)

Off to wash out my eyeballs...

Sunday, August 29, 2004 6:32 AM

CHILLI


I'm going to give this a seven, solely because it is an insane piece of FanFic. I'm in disbelief at how anyone can write anything this bizarre. Well, here comes the Hysterical Blindness.

Tuesday, February 6, 2007 6:35 AM

SABRI3L


That was funny, shallow and horrible :P


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