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The Dark Chronicles: The Prologue - The Girl
Wednesday, June 6, 2007

A man who betrayed his own side in the War for Independence which side he betrayed is another story,now a bounty hunter searches his days trying to find the meaning of life.


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Name of the Fan Fiction: The Dark Chronicles

Genre: Action/Fan Fiction

Author: Darkfly

Time Period: After Serenity

BDFDR (Big Damn F*cking Darkfly Rating Board): The chapters could be any of the following ratings but the majority of the chapters are 12A’s or 15’s with the few exceptions

12A, 15, or 18 (to the US, PG-13, R, or NC17)

Author Notes: This is my 1st ever fan faction, it’s actually my 1st ever completed story I’ve written, since most stories haven’t been interesting enough to actually finish. Don’t mind if my writing ain’t that good. It will coincide with Tina’s (TinaDoll) Verse & some stories will be intertwined into each other’s stories or related. My friends say I have a slightly odd sense of humor, you have been warned, just wait until the ant scene in Chapter 7.

Disclaimer: Firefly & Serenity are the rights of Fux (yeah I said Fux, sound cool wouldn’t you agree it should be there permanent name from now onwards), Universal, & Joss Whedon & in no way is this an official byproduct of Firefly or Serenity. Fux just you remember you cancelled Firefly, Drive, Dark Angel Family Guy twice, Tru Calling, & many other classic shows, you bastards.


Rating: 12A or PG-13 rated The following contains: Occasional Moderate Swearing, Moderate Violence, & No Sex(honest), okay there is mild reference to a whore


Prologue: The Girl

He starts to run toward the small hills in the distance, panting heavily,

thinking “I’m getting too old for this shit”,

checks his watch seven, six, five, four, three, he jumps to the ground surrounded by the long grass which in compass’s this planet called “Nature” then looking confused turns his head slowly to look back…“BOOM”, his head gets flown into the ground by the shear aftershock of the explosion,

“Got to stop using black-market timers”, he says to himself.

He starts the descent to the top of the hill, he reaches the top and he then turns around looking at the smoke rising into the sky, thinking back of a time when an old friend would smoke one of her clove cigars. He climbs down the side of the same hill setting his sights on his sleek & perfectly aerodynamic modified Cheetah Glider which he calls Scorpion since it has a purple scorpion painted on the side of the hull. Inside the cockpit of the glider he pushes the 3 ignition switches on, click, click, click, then pulls back on a big shiny red lever, the engines start to wine & then the thrusters move horizontally up much like on a Firefly class vessel & lift the glider off the ground horizontally & into the air. He maneuvers the glider straight past the wreckage, some people who survived the explosion try to shoot him down with what weapons but he just eases the glider past them & into to the heavens above.

45 minutes earlier…

He stealthily walks down a corridor towards a laboratory, opening the door to the laboratory ever so slightly, he walks in but feels a tingly feeling in his right knee, he remembers how his friend shot him in the kneecap just for losing Space Monopoly, he then curses her name under his breath.

Both the scientists in the laboratory hear somebody talk and turn around spotting him, one of them runs for the alarm but this intruder just cold heartily shoots both of them with his eyes closed, he then looks at his modified revolver + silencer and thinks how beautiful it is much like his old sweetheart.

He then runs toward a control panel in the room glancing through a sheet of plastic glass looking at a girl locked up in a chair, asleep. He flicks some switches releasing the lock on the door to the room with the kid in, he then turns around and is about to go to the room but as he turns around, the kid is standing by his side making him jump.

Girl says, “Who are you”, he replies,

“I need to get you outer here ASAP (pronouncing it A-SAP) okay kid”,

“That’s because you have just stole something from these people & you’ve rigged the place with explosives” the girl replies”,

he replies back, “So it’s true about the Alliance playing around with kids minds but hey I should know, come on I need to get you outer here now”.

They both run down the corridor to an exit which is locked, he tries to blow the lock off with his gun.

“God damn revolver, alright get back kid”, he says, he throws a blue grenade at the door blowing the door straight off the wall.

“Ah shit”, surrounded by Alliance officers both of them put their hands up surrendering,

“Can I offer a suggestion which doesn’t involve violence officers or is this the wrong government”, he sarcastically says to them,

“You’re going to get a beating, asshole”, replies the officer in charge”,

“well I at least I tried”, he sarcastically says back,

he throws a white colored grenade onto the floor releasing smoke all around the area,

“get down kido”, he says to the girl,

he then pulls out a semi automatic gun and without remorse just lets rip spraying bullets clawing through the air searing the flesh they hit till there is no sound of anybody breathing apart from himself and the kid.

They both then run till they get to the gates surrounding the complex but there are 2 officer’s guarding the gate, he whips out another grenade this time it’s a red grenade & throws it in the general direction of the guards “BOOM”, the explosion was so big it made a crater in the ground where the previously impenetrable gate was located.

They both run out past the wreckage of the gate & ran towards the long grass located only a short distance from the Alliance base, they both duck hiding while any Alliance officer’s scout for anybody.

“Why did you save me”, the girl says,

“Well cause I once knew a girl which was very much like you & myself…not saying I’m a girl though”, he replies.

“I’ve have to get back to my ship okay, so I’m gonna have to leave you here”, he says,

“but where will I go”, he then replies back,

“Just keep going west after about 15 miles your find a town”,

“Okay”, she replies.

“By the way my name is Jessica, Jessica Saffron”, she says,

“Well nice to meet you Jessica”, stares at her hair,

“I used to know a woman who looked just like you minus the age difference she called herself Saffron though I doubt that was her real name, no chance of any relation,

“I wouldn’t know, my mother was a whore & left me to the Alliance’s device’s before I was seven, Jessica replied,

“Well I guarantee I’ll meet you again someday Jessica”, he replies,

“Oh we will meet again in exactly…”, he cuts in saying,

“you really shouldn’t use those powers in public okay”, & then passes her some money

“For buying yourself a trip off this godforsaken world”, he says, Jessica then says,

“Thank you for saving me, by the way what is your name”, seconds pass by then he says,

“the name’s Dark, Matt Dark”

James Bond music starts to play

COMMENTS

Thursday, June 7, 2007 1:26 AM

JANE0904


This might be good, but it's difficult to tell. I would suggest you take some time to check out other fics, particularly in the way to layout paragraphs. For instance, as a general rule, you use a new paragraph for each person's speech, which makes it a lot easier to read. Try it. You can always update.

Thursday, June 7, 2007 2:00 AM

DARKFLY


I've changed it a bit, hope it's a bit better, I've never done any fan fic ever let alone online so I'm not used to it.

Friday, June 8, 2007 5:48 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


If it wasn't for the structuring and typographic issues...this would all kinds of bloody hilarious! Definitely can get behind this kind of wisecracking fella;D

BEB


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