BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

OVEROBSESSED765

Decided/Undecided
Wednesday, September 27, 2006

First fanfic, M/I... comments please! critiscm welcome!


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1822    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Undecided... Inara was undecided. It was only a month after Miranda. So much had changed... A dark cloud had come over the once happy ship. And yet, the captain had changed as well. Less arguements and stabs at her job. She was torn... Such a nice change and yet... the complications

Decided... Mal was decided when he woke up that morning after another dream. What happened on Miranda made him realize life was too short to waste. After breakfast he walked purposefully to Inara's shuttle and burst straight in despite her protests and...

Decided... Inara was decided after that one kiss that she wished would have lasted forever. He burst into her shuttle like always and walked straight up to her and just... kissed her. It was everything she had ever imagined. Gentle, Sweet, Passionate, and a little hungry.

Undecided... Mal was undecided after he saw the look on her face after he had kissed her. Confused, and yet determind, almost angry it seemed...

Decided... Mal was decided after Inara leaned in and kissed him for all he was worth.

Complications- despite her job... despite his stubbornness, it took one kiss to end all complications

COMMENTS

Wednesday, September 27, 2006 4:02 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


A Mal/Inara shipper's dream, OverObsessed765...but definitely something Joss would tease us with before kicking the metaphorical puppy;)

Still...short, sweet and climactic:D

BEB

Wednesday, September 27, 2006 8:31 PM

AMDOBELL


Yes, I can see it would take such a sudden determined act on Mal's behalf to move them both in the direction they long to go but have had such trepidation over admitting to each other. Definitely better to say it without using words. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Thursday, September 28, 2006 1:49 PM

OVEROBSESSED765


thanks guys... im really new at this... any suggestions on how to improve? and thanks Ali D, thats kinda what i thought, they wouldnt openly admit it but it would happen eventually

Thursday, September 28, 2006 2:24 PM

HOPERULES


Not bad. I like the fact there is not any talk. It could use a little more detail though.

Saturday, October 7, 2006 9:50 PM

STINKINGROSE


Short but sweet. I liked it.
Okay, uncertainties over: NOW what do they do?!

Wednesday, March 21, 2007 7:16 PM

SHINYOTTER


Short and sweet. If only they would/could.


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