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No Power in the 'Verse (round 2)
Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Well, the other was received well, so I wrote it from a different perspective. I'm glad my muse likes me at the present.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1773    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

"No power in the 'verse can stop me."

River smiled smugly. Kaylee looked aghast at the three dead men. Three dead with three shots. River held the gun in her hand as if it belonged there. Kaylee couldn’t remember how it had gotten from her hand to River's. She couldn’t function properly. Thoughts came so very slowly. River was sweet and harmless. She hadn’t even looked at the men she'd killed. Try as she might, Kaylee could not keep the fear from showing in her eyes. She simply couldn’t help feeling afraid. She was afraid before River even came. Now she was terrified. Of the dead men. Of the gun. Of River. How frightening she was with the gun in her hand. Yet she managed to retain her look of beautiful innocence.

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 9:37 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Spot on, AR! Props for conveying Kaylee's fear and confusion about River's sudden abilities appearing out of nowhere;)

BEB

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 10:37 PM

AGENTKITTY


Oh yay! Great job. I'm glad yer muse likes you too.


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