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No Power in the 'Verse
Tuesday, May 30, 2006

My muse comes durring the wee hours of the morning... This is a bit of River consciousness durring War Stories.


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"No power in the verse can stop me."

She said it with a smug grin, but even she did not know exactly what it meant. She held the thing in her hand. It was so cold. So terrifying. The terror was emanating from Kaylee. She couldn’t stand to look into her eyes to see that fear. Fear of the thing. Fear of her. And the thing seemed to posses her. It felt so normal. Like she'd held it just so forever. Like she'd killed men with one shot every day of her life. She didn’t even have to look. Have to aim. It terrified her that she could do that. But the smugness would not recede. Would not give way to the terror. She sauntered off, still holding the thing tightly. It was wrong. All wrong. But it was also so very right.

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 10:32 AM

TONYAHUQT03


Creepy makes me think of things to come. Good River. I'm enjoying your little blurbs of consciences (did I spell that right?) anyway I'm enjoying them. There always short and sweet. :)
Tonya

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 11:59 AM

AMDOBELL


I could see that there would be a sense of dichotomy for our albatross and short as this piece was it succinctly conveyed just the right measure of words to fit River perfectly. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 1:05 PM

ARAGLAS


I totallly thought that Tonyahuqt03 wrote "creepy in a way that makes me come"

I was spazzing out for like ten minutes.

But I was also freaking out, this is a really good little drabble! I liked it, it ws creepy (though I dicided not to come). Keep it up, this is perfect!

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 8:33 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Spot on, Tonyahuqt03! Loved how ya had River thinking both smug and panicked thoughts about how she just shot 3 men without looking at them:D

BEB

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 10:35 PM

AGENTKITTY


Good stuff :)


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