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Assistant Writers and Story Editors needed

POSTED BY: SERENITYVALLEY
UPDATED: Friday, July 4, 2003 06:18
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Friday, July 4, 2003 6:18 AM

SERENITYVALLEY


Hello, sorry this is a bit off topic, and if you want to ignore, me, fine, but some people may take interest.

My friends and I are making a second film. I think it will be pretty good. I'm looking for people from all different perspectives to look at it and edit things. I don't mean like spelling and grammar. I mean like what they think should be added or subtracted or if something is too confusing or too predictable.

Everything is orriginal, so please don't give me any ideas that have been copyrighted or something. Even our music will be written and composed by us. I'd just like an outside opinion. If you could, will you go through the script and make comments on everything that needs commenting on? We're trying to get this script down perfect as can be.

You can find the script at
http://www.simple-assault.com/Areif_OrDeto.htm
It's not working for certain people. I think you'll need MS WORD. There is another version that will work on there, except all the centering and allignment went away, but otherwise, it's ok.

Remember, this is just to people who are interested and stuff, so no obligations, of course, but if you do put major input that we use and all, I'll put you in the credits as "assistant writer" or "story editor".

Synopsis: A man comes to a town, but can't remember why or how he got here. He meets some pretty strange people. Something's going on, but he can't put his finger on it. Something is just really weird. When he tries to get out of "Areif O'rDeto", he realizes that he can't. Something is keeping him and the others there. He'll stop at nothing to get to the bottom of it.

Thank you for your help

--J Leigh

"Did he just go crazy and fall asleep?" -Wash
"I told him to sit down," -Simon

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