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'fly-ku: game of joy!

POSTED BY: REALLYKAYLEE
UPDATED: Tuesday, September 27, 2005 11:44
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Tuesday, September 27, 2005 11:44 AM

REALLYKAYLEE


that's right. 5-7-5 about our favorite show (and soon to be movie) in the 'verse. get creative! many apologies to Buson, Basho and Issa.
HINTS
*"a haiku is simply what is happening in this place at this moment"- Basho
*include few adjectives and shun needless conjunctions
*set in the present
*confine to the senses; make sure your reader feels.

a poor try

jayne says "smells like *blank*"
i laugh at your censorship
i say "if it's yours"

see serenity
inside the atmo waiting
fry cooks always fail

shakespeare: more words than God.

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