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BOOK OF DAYS SERIES: #36. "Revelations - Chapter 2/2"

Friday, April 28, 2006

Mal and Inara make an announcement. Kaylee has a nightmare and some plans are put on hold. Simon/Kaylee. Mal/Inara. 36th story in a series.

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Well, I think there are four stories left, all with multiple chapters. Thanks for sticking with me through this whole series and for the great feedback.

As always, I love the guesses everyone is making as to what is going to happen.

There will be thrilling heroics but certain things need to happen first. Those of you clammoring for revenge, it'll happen.

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Chapter 2

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Mal couldn’t remember ever being so shocked in his life. His knees weakened and he was dangerously close to collapse as the shock of Inara’s announcement seeped slowly into his brain.

Inara turned away from him. “Now get out of my home.”

Mal shook his head, the ability to speak returning slowly. “W – wait a minute. You don’t just drop this bomb on me and expect –“

“That’s exactly what I expect, Mal. Get out.” Her voice was as cold as he’d ever heard it.

He set his jaw. “No.”

Inara whirled on him, her eyes ablaze with furious fire. “Do you even begin to understand why I am so upset?”

Mal shrugged, trying to make light of his apology. “I was an ass.”

Inara rolled her eyes. “That is obvious to the entire crew.”

“But that isn’t the only reason?” Mal was confused. He would never understand women folk.

Inara sank to the couch, covering her face as she sobbed even harder into her hands. He couldn’t understand because she hadn’t told him.

Mal was beside her immediately, his heart tearing knowing he was the cause of her tears. “I’m sorry. I am. I was an ass. I shouldn’t have – what? Tell me?” He didn’t know what to do when a woman cried. “What can I do? Inara –“

“You need to apologize, Mal.”

Mal blinked at her. “I just did.”

Inara looked up at him, her eyes narrowed. “They will walk off this ship, Mal. And if they do, so will I.”

Mal shook his head. “Won’t let ‘em do that, ‘Nara.”

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Simon held Kaylee’s hair away from her face as she hunched over the small sink in their room, loosing what little she’d eaten of her lunch. One hand soothingly rubbed circles on her ba

Comments
Friday, 28 April 2006 15:34
Yaaay!
*giggle*
Wonderful chapter. And Jayne was hilarious as ever. Giggled my way through this one :)
Tnx for posting!
Friday, 28 April 2006 16:11
So many unanswered questions and the threat of dark memories constantly hovering just beyond the scene.

A lighter chapter but I'm still very worried about River.

I've decided to stop guessing what happens next. I always assume the worst and it's vaguely depressing.

*****
Taya
Friday, 28 April 2006 16:29
Much as I loved this River has me really worried for those impending rug rats and thereby the mommas and dads in waiting. Gulp. Poor River, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 28 April 2006 16:54
Beautiful work Leiasky but I'm worried About Kaylee. She cant concentrate on her work and she's having trouble with her other love mechanics. I really wonder how Inara is going to deal with the fall out from her actions once Kaylee and Mal find out. As always excellent dialog and tone and plot.Thank you.
Friday, 28 April 2006 18:25
Just loved this chapter. Jayne always pointing out the obvious, Zoe telling Inara to mark the day the Mal finally admits he is an ass- Great! The angst is creeping up at a slow pace, I am scared for the fallout!!! Can't wait for your next post!
Friday, 28 April 2006 19:39
Wonderful as ever... say, I wonder what Zoe won? I get the feelin' its more than just money...
And Mal, hah, he can be as much a boob as Simon is/was/can be. LOL!!!!

-Danny
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 April 2006 21:16
This was good. I hope everything works out. I worry for poor lil River. I have expected simon to say "Are you pregnant too?" when she said she was tired cuz then she'd shrug him off and call him a boob. :)
xSweetSerenityx
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 April 2006 22:36
When Simon said that he didn't want to deliver both babies at the same time and it was already hard enough to deliver his own and then River said you wont. I'm thinking that something is going to happen to eath Simon or Kaylee that will cause Simon not to be able to deliver it. I'm think that they take Kaylee and she goes into labor.
Friday, 28 April 2006 23:26
>And Jayne was hilarious as ever. Giggled my way through this one :)

Well, you'll love the next one then. It's mostly funny:)

>I'm thinking that something is going to happen to eath Simon or Kaylee that will cause Simon not to be able to deliver it.

Something - yes.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 29 April 2006 02:39
Brilliant, as always, both this installment AND the last one!

I love how perfectly you always manage to characterize, how flawlessly you write, how perfectly timed everything is. You are seriously one of the most brilliant authors I've ever seen, and definitely the most prolific.

Keep it up!

~Jules~
Saturday, 29 April 2006 05:00
Normally, I would have much problemos with all this hidden angsty and muddled danger. But you pull it off with style and skill, Leiasky:)

And I am glad there will be a fluffy interlude before the angsty stuff really hits the fan and the big guns fire their loads:(

BEB
Saturday, 29 April 2006 15:37
You are one of the best fanfic writers i've read. Keep 'em coming.
Thursday, 11 May 2006 05:34
This chapter is good and happy and all,
but I have a bad feeling it won't last
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 16:37
*Zoe favored the mercenary with a stern glare.
Jayne shot Zoe an annoyed look but said no more.*
I love how Jayne is so incredibly afraid of Zoe.

Simon/River dialogue at the end was good too, and I can't wait to see what it is she knows.
Saturday, 03 June 2006 20:50
hmmm, questions questions...among them, What exactly did Zoe win that made her force a smile? hmmm, the other questions i'm sure you've already heard, so i'll keep 'em to myself.

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