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THE TRIAL (06) Part (01)
Saturday, August 6, 2011

Mal is sanguine about the kind of reception Serenity will get on Persephone.


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THE TRIAL (06) Part (01)

Follows BREAK OUT (05). Precedes SHADOW (07).

The series so far: A LION’S MOUTH (01) ADVENTURES IN SITTING (02) SPARKS FLY (03) EXPECTATIONS (04) BREAK OUT (05)

Mal is sanguine about the kind of reception Serenity will get on Persephone.

Mouse over Chinese words in text for translations Rating: All my stories are PG to PG-13 to occasional R. You will not find detailed descriptions of blood, gore, and sex, but you will find situations appropriate for mature readers, innuendo, implication, and (gasp) swear words. This story is entirely PG. Thanks to my sister for beta reading.

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* * *

As Serenity neared Persephone, Zoe sought out Mal, and found him, as she knew she would, on the bridge, staring into the Black. With forty people aboard, it was the only place on the ship where he could distance himself from the crowd. She knew he was too agitated to take refuge in his bunk, and she knew his strained relationship with Inara made him not welcome in her shuttle at present. She brought the topic on the table directly. “You’re worried about the kind of reception we’re gonna get on Persephone,” she stated.

“Well, actually, I’m sanguine,” Mal countered.

Zoe was not fooled. “‘Hopeful,’ sir? Or ‘bloody’?”

Mal shifted in the pilot’s seat and sighed. One drawback to the close working relationship he had with Zoe was that he couldn’t get away with such ambiguity—she knew what underlay his words. She wouldn’t let him off until he had aired the root of his worry. He mulled over his thoughts for a moment, then began.

“When I was lyin’ there in the infirmary,” ¬—talkin’ to Shepherd Book—he almost said, then realized how crazy that sounded, and amended, “thinking on things Shepherd Book used to say—anyways, I just got this feeling, things may not go so smooth, this end.”

“Like they did on the other end, sir?” Zoe said, drily.

“Still tweaking me on that, Zoe, and rightly so.” Mal regretted more than ever that he’d put Zoe—and her baby—gah! A baby! on Serenity? (he shoved that thought aside for later consideration)—in harm’s way during the slave break-out on 泥球 Ní Qiú. And also on 尘球 Chén Qiú. He had to do better by her. “That’s why I want you, Simon, River, and Neumann to go with Inara in her shuttle when she breaks off from us in near orbit.”

“Sir, I should stay with Serenity.”

“Zoe, there’s a risk of this going…not smooth.”

“What makes you think so?”

“Can’t say, exactly.”

“You figure anyone will even notice our arrival, sir? Eavesdown Docks is a busy place.”

“I waved the Society to Abolish Human Trafficking on Persephone,” Mal told her. “They’re sending a representative to meet us, a little reception committee to help the people get to the refugee shelter, and then get on their feet and on their way. We hand ’em off and they won’t be our responsibility no more.”

“Seems like a reasonable plan, sir. You’ll need me to keep all those people organized, moving in the right direction.”

She was right. Mal needed her aboard Serenity to keep things organized. He was sending River away, so he’d be landing the ship himself, and having Zoe in the cargo bay would keep things running smooth. Still, since his conversation with Book—his imagined conversation with Book, he corrected himself—he’d revised his assessment of the situation entirely. Getting the slaves off 泥球 Ní Qiú had been the easy part. Blue Sun had the resources to alert authorities on Persephone of an inbound Firefly carrying suspicious cargo, and he was going to have a devil of a time explaining the presence of thirty-two unofficial passengers, all of them without Ident Cards. Even though there was no way he could be accused of “stealing” slaves (not even Blue Sun could be brash enough to claim these people were property to be stolen), he was at the very least setting himself up for an unpleasant encounter with the Immigration Authority.

Which begged the very question of why there were even Immigration Authorities at all. It was just like Shepherd Book had said. There wasn’t a good reason for all the tariff barriers and immigration restrictions between worlds, not really. It was all one happy gorram Alliance, weren’t it? But Mal had noticed that since the War ended and all the planets had entered into a state of happy gorram Unification, trade and travel between worlds had become more restricted than ever. Sure, a body could travel easily from one world to another to go sight-seeing or visiting friends and relatives, but just try to settle down and get a job there and a whole crop of restrictions sprung up like weeds. Turned out you had to wade through mountains of red tape to apply for residency and work permits, and if you were caught workin’ somewhere when you weren’t allowed, 天上 帮助 你 tiānshàng bāngzhù nǐ .

There were exemptions for certain kinds of employment. Nurses, teachers, and certified childcare professionals were welcome everywhere. And people with jobs that involved interplanetary travel as a matter of course were exempt from having to seek work permits on every world they visited. Jobs like captaining or crewing a transport vessel, for example. But Mal and his crew were forbidden from seeking permanent employment on most worlds, and barred from settling anywhere but their home world unless they went through the process of applying for residency. Mal didn’t have the option of working or living on his home world: Shadow was destroyed. It was one of the reasons Mal had taken to interplanetary transport as his job, after the War. And because of his status as a defeated Browncoat and Shadow exile, Mal was also denied permanent legal residency on any Core world, most Border worlds, and even a few Rim worlds as well. Good thing he liked flyin’, ’cause his options for legal employment were few.

In any case, Mal’s opinion was that the whole gorram system was designed to make it easier for the established players to control the movement of goods and workers from one world to another. Tariff barriers and restrictions squeezed hard on the smaller businesses that couldn’t afford the full-time staff to deal with the paperwork, and ironically made it possible for people like him to make a living as a smuggler. And the Immigration Agencies sprung up to prevent people from going freely to where the jobs were, ensuring that the inequalities between the Core and Rim worlds were maintained. Not that Mal was prejudiced or anything, but the Immigration officers he had encountered could be blunt and brutal in the application of their power. They had a limited area of authority, and the people over whom they had jurisdiction were often the most helpless of all, people desperate for work, with very few options but to stay home in poverty, work illegally, or sell themselves into indenture. Desperation put those people into a position where they were vulnerable and had few legal rights, and the Immigration Authority was known to abuse its position. “I want you to stay safe,” Mal said, lamely, to Zoe.

“I’m not a hothouse plant, sir. You’re already sending away your pilot. You’ll be landing the ship. So who will meet the reception committee? Jayne, your public relations man? He’ll suspect an ambush, shoot first, then ask if they’re the folks with the bus to the shelter.” Mal had to smile at the picture she painted.

Zoe was still puzzled as to the nature of Mal’s worries. “Just how dangerous you figure these abolitionists to be? I thought most of them subscribed to non-violence.”

Mal was a bit taken by surprise by the turn Zoe’s mind had taken, but, as usual, Zoe was right. Many of the Abolitionists were members of a religious organization that held very seriously to the principle of non-violence. Those people were the last ones to get involved with some kind of ambush. What they were doing dealing with a man like him, with his history of violence—. The Shepherd Book in his mind snorted. “History, my Aunt Fanny! Current events, is more like.” Mal turned to Zoe with a look that held as much, or more, meaning than his words. “Terraforming company on 泥球 Ní Qiú may have tagged our ship as carrying illegal immigrants. I expect we might have a visit from Immigration soon as we hit the dirt.” That was enough. Zoe would know what to do.

* * *

Mal knocked at the door to Inara’s shuttle. “Inara, may I come in?”

“No.”

He entered the shuttle anyway.

“I said no. What are you doing here?”

“I, uh…” Mal began in confusion, then he recalled that he had come on official business and said in his most captain-y voice, “I don’t know what kind of reception we’ll be getting planetside, and I wanted to advise to you separate early and break atmo independently of Serenity.”

“I already planned to do that, to keep my appointments, Mal,” Inara replied with some acerbity.

To Inara’s surprise, Mal completely ignored the barb about her appointments. He clearly had something else on his mind, and he ploughed on. “I need to ask you a favor. You see, our cargo manifest don’t exactly state that we’ve got thirty-two passengers aboard, and if it should happen that we meet up with a port inspector first thing, they’ll probably want to detain everybody on board for questioning and that might could cause problems. I don’t want to cause Dr Ip no extra grief, so I’m hopin’ you’d be so gracious as to give him a lift in your shuttle. This ain’t his problem.”

“I could do that,” Inara responded.

“Would you also take Simon and River?” Mal requested. “Simon’s got his notice of rescindment in case of trouble, but it’s best if those two just stay out of the way of trouble in the first place.”

“Of course.” There was an awkward pause. “Are you expecting trouble—” Inara began at the same time that Mal said, “I’m sorry I—”

They both stopped short, and there was another awkward pause while each waited for the other to complete the thought. Neither one did.

“Thanks for your help,” Mal finally said, formal and distant. He turned and exited the shuttle.

* * *

Mal found Simon and River in the infirmary. “Doc, I’m sending you and River with Inara in her shuttle. Plan is to separate in near orbit and break atmo separately from Serenity. That way if anything goes wrong—”

“You’re expecting something to go wrong?” Simon asked, his suspicions thoroughly aroused.

“A bolt out of the Blue,” River said.

“Just ordinary precautions, Doc,” Mal said, giving River a look. “If there’s a trap, I don’t want all of us walkin’ into it. Leave our options open. So you two just lay low until you get the all-clear, then rejoin us later at Eavesdown Docks.”

“Two lay low, blue steel shackles, waiting to bite you,” River said cryptically. “Knight in shining armor caught in the purple sorcerer’s net. Two by two, led off to limbo.”

“Right. Exactly what I was sayin’,” Mal replied, now made thoroughly uneasy by her words. “Now, Doc, I’m sending Neumann along with Inara. It’s in his contract that he gets dropped off at Persephone. I just wanna be sure he’s clear of this, in case—”

“There you are again,” Simon interrupted. “Mal, you’re worried about this going wrong, aren’t you?”

“Just never tried my hand at human trafficking before, Doc,” Mal replied, attempting to make a joke of it.

“Mr Houghton can be trusted,” River stated with certainty.

“Is that so, Albatross? You had dealings with the Society to Abolish Human Trafficking before?”

Others have made waves.”

Mal eyed her sharply. He had learned that River’s strange remarks often contained critical elements of sense, so he asked, “What kinda waves are you talking about, River? Who’s sent a wave?”

“Blue is darkened on blueness, even where Persephone goes—to the sightless realm where darkness is awake upon the dark,” River recited with the air one of quoting a poem.

Mal stared a moment. Girl had a thing about “blue” now, didn’t she? “Now that is downright creepifying. You tryin’ to boost my confidence, Albatross?” He didn’t wait for an answer. “Now, Doc, am I gonna be able to count on you not strangling Neumann on the way dirtside?”

“I’ve worked out my differences with Dr Neumann,” Simon answered. “Oh, and, Mal—thanks for the good advice. About Kaylee. About trusting. You should try it yourself.”

“Didn’t ask for your advice, Doc.”

“It’s your own advice. I’m just recommending you apply it to yourself as well.”

* * *

Mal piloted Serenity into the berth at Eavesdown Docks. Systematically, he went through the shut down sequence, then joined Zoe, Jayne, and Kaylee in the cargo bay, where the excitement of the thirty-two “guests” was palpable. Zoe was doing a great job with crowd control. She’d tipped off Jayne that Mal expected some trouble, and he was prepared, standing alert by the airlock with an extra gun strapped on. Kaylee was spreading sunshine among the passengers. As soon as Mal appeared in the cargo bay, he was surrounded by his “guests,” many of them eager to thank him, which made him more than a mite uncomfortable. They were not out of the woods yet. He hadn’t seen anything from the bridge to make him suspect an ambush, had seen no evidence of Feds, Immigration Police or Port Control, but he also hadn’t seen anything looking like the Abolitionists’ reception committee or their transport. He knew that for the ex-slaves, the journey had just begun. The Abolitionists’ shelter was just a temporary refuge. They still needed to find work, get back on their feet, and pull their lives together.

Mal lowered the ramp and looked around cautiously, hand near his weapon, ready for trouble. There didn’t seem to be any, and that made him worried. Zoe and Jayne stood at the ready in back-up positions, awaiting his signal for the all-clear. Mal didn’t see any trouble, but he didn’t see Mr Houghton, his contact with the SAHT, or any reception committee. In fact, he didn’t see any passers-by at all, and that’s when he knew he was humped.

So it was no surprise when he saw the first Fed appear in his peripheral vision off to the right. And the left. And then another, and another. The surprise was that he was soon facing an entire squadron of well-armed, armored Feds, and behind them, even more goons in the uniform of the Immigration Authority. Though his hand had instinctively twitched for his gun at the first sight of a Fed, he knew this was no place for a gun battle and he raised his empty hands in evidence. “他们送我们之后全军 Tāmen song wǒmen zhīhòu quánjūn . How dangerous they think we are?” he muttered under his breath.

“Malcolm Reynolds?” demanded the Fed officer. Mal acknowledged his name. “You are bound by law for trafficking human beings across interplanetary borders, contrary to Union of Allied Planets law.”

Mal’s jaw dropped. How had Shepherd Book known? No wait, how had he himself known? This was not reasonable; this was his nightmare. He spoke up in his own defense. “I am not trafficking slaves, officer. These people are passengers. They are free to go wherever they please.”

While Mal, Zoe, Jayne—and Kaylee—oh, 天啊 tiān ā , not Kaylee, too—were surrounded by the Federal officers, the Immigration Officers moved into the cargo bay and herded the passengers against the port bay wall. “Passengers,” the Immigration Officer stated with ironic emphasis, “Please present your Ident Cards and papers for inspection and verification.”

Of course, not a single one of the people from 泥球 Ní Qiú had an Ident Card to present. The Immigration Officers moved in gleefully, like a pack of wild dogs approaching a fresh kill. As Mal, Zoe, Jayne, and Kaylee were led off in handcuffs by the Feds, Mal heard the Immigration Officer say, “You will all be detained in custody at the Bureau of Immigration until you can present evidence of your identities and business on this planet. You may retain legal counsel…”

* * *

Inara brought the shuttle in for a graceful landing at the midtown shuttleport. As she prepared to leave the shuttle, she spoke to her passengers. “Ip, I understand you’re leaving Serenity at this port of call. I just wanted to let you know it’s been a pleasure meeting you, and I wish you all success with your research and publications.” She offered him her hand, which he shook awkwardly, looking nonplussed. If she was reading him correctly, he didn’t want to leave Serenity. “Simon, River, feel free to stay in the shuttle if you choose. I’m going out.”

“You won’t be using this shuttle for…your work?” Simon asked hesitatingly, noting her beautiful clothing.

Inara refrained from snorting with displeasure. Why, oh why, did everyone always assume she was dressed for work? This was a simple, casual dress, and not even one of her nicer ones. “No, Simon. As I’ve tried to tell Mal, I did not come to Persephone to see clients. I am attending to personal and Guild business. I will be gone most of the day, but will return here by evening.”

“May I leave my luggage here to be picked up later?” Neumann asked.

“Certainly,” she replied, and strode out of the shuttle, leaving Neumann little choice but to head out as well.

* * *

Inara returned from her doctor’s appointments exhausted and spent. She wanted nothing more than to lie down, and perhaps work up the ambition to make herself a cup of tea before turning in for the night. Unfortunately, her shuttle was occupied by Simon and River, eager to talk after spending the day lying low in the shuttle with nothing to do but watch the cortex newswaves. And Neumann might be expected to pop back for his luggage at any time.

“Ohhh,” Inara moaned as she sank down on her bed.

“Inara!” Simon exclaimed. “What’s wrong? You look very ill.”

“Simon, I’m fine, just need recovery time,” she mumbled into her pillow.

“Did a client do this to you?”

Anger gave her the strength to answer. “Everybody always assumes it’s a client! No. I was engaged in private Guild business.”

“Rough business,” River said, with a strange look at Inara.

“Just need to rest,” she muttered.

“Do you want me to examine you?” Simon asked officiously, reaching for his medical bag.

“No! I’ve seen enough doctors today!” she shouted. Simon was shocked by her outburst. Inara sighed inwardly, reflecting that Simon and River had spent their entire day engaged in the usual thrilling “adventures in sitting,” and that they were starved for human contact. She gathered the shreds of her control together, and remembered her manners. “Sorry, Simon. I don’t mean to snap. I just need some rest.” She closed her eyes, and all was quiet for a time.

Simon was concerned at Inara’s condition and puzzled by her behavior. River wasn’t puzzled, but she kept her counsel. The “adventures in sitting” had not passed any more slowly than they had on a dozen other planets Serenity visited, where the plan of action generally called for the Captain, Zoe and Jayne to take the risks and do the job, Wash and Kaylee to prep the ship, and Simon and River to…sit around doing nothing. They were quite good at it, and had developed all sorts of ways of passing the time. But this time they were in the shuttle instead of the ship, and they were denied their usual resources. Simon couldn’t fiddle around in the infirmary, so he had tuned in to the local cortex news, and was treated to a boring blather about Persephone society girls preparing for the annual Advocates’ Dinner Dance. River, having recently been promoted from sitter to pilot, missed having the responsibility that the job entailed, and was more than usually bored. Partway through the day she had kicked Simon off the cortex and amused herself by hacking into local police channels. Even that wasn’t much fun. Apparently the criminals were taking a day off. There had been one police call to Eavesdown Docks in the morning, but nothing else all day.

The quiet was interrupted by the chime indicating that a wave had come through. Inara stirred. “River, will you just see who it is?” she said with a groan. “I don’t want to talk now.”

River opened the channel. “It’s Ip.”

“You talk to him, see what he wants,” Inara said.

你好 Nǐhǎo , Ip.”

“River,” he began without preamble, “the crew’s in trouble. I just headed over to the port district to look for another job as a supercargo or technical advisor, and the whole place is abuzz with the news that an entire squadron of Federal Marshals descended upon Eavesdown docks this morning and arrested the crew of a slave-trading ship.”

Inara tried to sit up. Simon approached the screen, paying very close attention.

“It’s the crew of Serenity,” Ip continued. “They’ve been taken down to the police station for booking.”

“What about the, uh, passengers?” Simon asked.

“Well, none of them could produce their identity papers…” he began.

“Neither can I!” River exclaimed, while Simon sardonically commented, “Right, because when you’re fleeing for your life, you always stop and gather your files to bring with you.”

“…so they’ve been taken to an illegal immigrant detention center until their status can be sorted out. Is Inara back yet?”

“She just got back,” River informed him.

“Maybe she can begin assessing what contacts she has that may be useful here. Look, I’m going to try to find out when the arraignment hearing is. I’ll come back there soon as I can. Maybe we can figure something out.”

* * *

Ip Neumann sought out a public cortex access and used his electronic card. Soon the peaceful face of Brother Chan ’eil Càil filled the screen. “So what occasions the wave, Dr. Ip? Have you made progress in fitting in with the crew of Serenity?”

“Well, yes, a bit,” Ip replied. “The Captain organized a slave escape from 泥球 Ní Qiú, and I aided and abetted.

“So you are fitting right in,” he said with wry amusement. “Splendid.”

“Well, I heeded your advice about making myself useful,” Ip responded. “So I made soup for forty.”

“But that isn’t why you’re calling, is it?”

“No,” Ip explained. “You see, the Captain made contact with an abolitionist society here on Persephone. He intended to release the people to their care, drop me off here as per contract, and go on his way. But he was met on arrival by a squadron of Federal Police who arrested him for slave trafficking. It’s a spurious charge of course, but he does not have the resources to defend himself, and I think it’s pretty much a given that he did not secure the slaves’ release through legal means. Immigration Authority has detained all of the slaves—ex-slaves. I wanted to talk to you, because I figured, with the missionary work you do among terraforming workers, you might have some idea what to do. I mean, I assume that you’ve been amongst the slaves as well as indentured laborers. If he’s convicted, he faces a very long prison term and tremendous fines. I think it would cost him his ship, at the very least. And his crew would be convicted of aiding and abetting. I could kiss my chance of finding out about Miranda goodbye forever.”

The former Operative had to smile to himself at Ip Neumann’s transparency. The young man was truly concerned about Serenity’s Captain and crew, but made no attempt to conceal the guileless self-interest that also motivated his desire to help. He said, “There’s more than one plan that would be destroyed if the Captain were convicted. How did you avoid arrest yourself?”

“I had already left the ship in the Companion’s shuttle. The Captain’s due to be arraigned in court tomorrow.”

“You’ll have to avoid direct association with the Captain, in the event that you’ve been implicated in the case. But there are many things you can do. First, you’ll need a list of any contacts or associates the Captain has on Persephone, particularly among people in positions of authority or high standing. Evaluate his contacts for their ability to put in a good word for him in the legal system, or for their willingness to pay for counsel. I have a few contacts myself. I’ll see what I can do.”

* * *

glossary

泥球 Ní Qiú [name of a world]

尘球 Chén Qiú [name of a world]

天上 帮助 你 tiānshàng bāngzhù nǐ [heaven help you]

他们送我们之后全军 Tāmen song wǒmen zhīhòu quánjūn [Sent the whole army after us]

天啊 tiān ā [god]

你好 Nǐhǎo [Hello]

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COMMENTS

Saturday, August 6, 2011 5:28 AM

EBFIDDLER


Hello, folks. Finally got this posted. Sorry for the long delay for those of you who have been waiting since part 4 of Break Out. Still have very limited internet access for now, but I got the revisions done on this part and decided to take advantage of my limited access to post this. Hope you enjoy!

Saturday, August 6, 2011 6:32 AM

NUTLUCK


Very cool, hopefully things get better for you. Look forward to the next chapter.

Saturday, August 6, 2011 6:49 AM

BYTEMITE


Slow careen towards inevitable. Nice build up.

The actions of the Feds and Blue Sun are pretty damning here. It's possible that they just took the word of the authority on Ni Qui who were stolen from, and they might even have testimony that Mal and crew expressed interest in slave trafficking before this theft. But the thing is, that wouldn't get them the trajectory of the crew or tell them where to set the arrest and ambush.

If Serenity was the only ship that landed or they could narrow down to them from a selection of ships, they could track their trajectory from their energy signature... But only if they could find it. Or they were tracking them from the beginning, but they'd have to either be paranoid in general or at least have a reason to be suspicious. So the most likely thing is, they got the cortex account information from whatever port authority was on Ni Qui, and intercepted their wave... To an Abolishionist group. There you have it, folks.

Saturday, August 6, 2011 9:35 AM

AMDOBELL


Poor Mal, trying so hard to help them as have been on the wrong end of the trafficking business only for the bully boys of the Alliance to use his good intentions against him and take the poor innocents ex-slaves into custody. They really are the dregs of humanity. I really hope Ip and his friend can help. I also got a bit frustrated with River being even less understandable than usual. Really could have done with a moment of coherence from her. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

Saturday, August 6, 2011 10:03 AM

ZOESMOM


BYTEMITE, a little paranoid, are we? In "A Lion's Mouth" (from this series) we learned that merchant transport vessels have to file a cargo manifest with the authorities; presumably this would include origin and destination, as well as contents (and possibly a flight plan as well). All Blue Sun had to do was get its hands on the manifest after the Ni Qiu police tracked the blood trail to Serenity's birth at the port.

Or maybe you are right--they are being followed. ;)

Saturday, August 6, 2011 10:39 AM

PLATONIST


Oh Mal, hope Ip can help, because this time, Inara can't.

Interesting developments.

Saturday, August 6, 2011 1:06 PM

BYTEMITE


? I didn't say they were being followed. I said they'd have to find their energy signature in orbit to calculate their trajectory.

So it's more likely they found out who they were going TO from intersected waves.

Saturday, August 6, 2011 1:52 PM

BYTEMITE


Cargo manifests, maybe. But if they'd decided the crew were persons of interests - and I think they'd have to for this kind of reception - then chances are they have the waves to the abolitionists and know full well that the crew wasn't out for slave trading.

Just another example of the layer of lies that the officials keep up to protect the slave trade.

Monday, August 8, 2011 3:52 AM

EBFIDDLER


Wow, all this speculation as to how the authorities tracked Serenity to Persephone! I'll admit that was something I only gave a little bit of thought to when I wrote this, but I'm sure enjoying the discussion. The authorities on Niu Qiu may well have heard from the cargo agent that Mal was expressing interest in slave trafficking. (All that talk he made while drawing out information about the slaves--it certainly fooled Ip, at least at first, and it could have fooled the cargo agent as well.) I like Zoesmom's speculation that the authorities might have tracked Mal and Zoe's route to Serenity's berth and made deductions from that. Also, Niu Qiu is not a very busy spaceport (I know this because I am the author ;-) and I have a clear picture of this spaceport in my mind!) and there weren't exactly a lot of other spaceships taking off around the right time--Port Authority (the "tower" mentioned in Break Out) would easily know this. I also like Bytemite's speculations that more high-tech means were used to track the ship because that means more sophisticated police detection was involved. Warrants to examine wave logs, examination of filed flight plans, etc.--which means that Blue Sun has its hand in pretty deep with the civil authority here. Also, please consider that Ip (who heard Mal talk about slave trading and believed he was serious about it) was out and about in town, that he is a garrulous individual who can't stop talking to people, even perfect strangers (like the Operative) who he lets into his confidence. Ip knew perfectly well where the ship was bound, because it was in his contract that he was going to be dropped off on Persephone. I don't think Ip would deliberately rat out Mal, but you never know what that guy would say, and to whom. He talks a lot.

Meanwhile, Ali D, I'm sorry you found River rather incoherent here. It won't last. River (in my stories, anyway) tends to get more cryptic when she is more worried. She forgets that no one else can get inside her head and follow her stream of consciousness, which is perfectly clear to her. She also forgets that few people are as well-read as she is, and that not everyone has such a fondness for ancient texts (like 20th century pop culture and 16th century Shakespeare), so that her metaphorical references (again, perfectly clear to her) go sailing over their heads. She'll speak more plainly later on. BTW, the poem she references is by DH Lawrence, and with Blue and Persephone and all that darkness, I couldn't resist ;-)

Platonist...Inara is weakened, but don't count her out. This time Mal has to rely on the members of his crew that he's not accustomed to rely on for help.

Thanks to all commenters and readers, I REALLY like getting the feedback. It's addictive!

Monday, August 8, 2011 9:53 AM

BYTEMITE


You're one of us now.

One of us...

*Waves back the creepy brain programmers*

*For now*

*Innocent*


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