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Inara Waits for Mal
Wednesday, December 2, 2009

a haiku written for Three Word Wednesday


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Inara Waits for Mal - a "Firefly" haiku

by Mendur

Heartache? She denies -

but 'til the reckless one returns,

her nerves are jangled.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, December 2, 2009 4:44 PM

BYTEMITE


Aw, that's sweet in a way.

Thursday, December 3, 2009 12:21 PM

HOPERULES


Really like it. The Haiku form suits Inara.

Sunday, December 6, 2009 8:31 AM

ANOTHERSKY


Aww. Awww.

Ha ha, since the 'reckless one' does plenty of jangling of nerves when he IS around. I love that the haiku "split" places the pause after 1.) a denial and 2.)a stasis state. Augh, waiting!

Sunday, December 6, 2009 8:32 AM

ANOTHERSKY


And totally denying it!


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