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WHITESILENCE

No Right to Ask
Friday, May 4, 2007

She had no right to ask him, gave that up when she left him for dead. 100 word drabble series with a hint of Rayne, 5 of 7.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1324    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

SaVE me!

He slammed her body against the wall again, stars across her vision. Elsewhere in the ship, Reaver screams echoed as they tried to find the hidden crew. Serenity was overrun and even if she could fight them all off, she wasn’t sure if the boat would be able to fly. Still, it was her home and had once been his too. River stared at Jayne’s mutilated face, all their sorrow crashing over her and knew that she had no right to ask him, gave that up when she left him for dead but she would anyway.

"Help me?"


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COMMENTS

Monday, May 7, 2007 10:31 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Utterly fantastic work here, whitesilence!

BEB

Sunday, May 13, 2007 9:47 PM

AMDOBELL


Oh yes, I feel a plan coming on! Love the notion of River being able to reach through the horror of what happened to him to Jayne's spark of humanity. This is very gripping. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me


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