BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - SUSPENSE

WHITESILENCE

Haze of Red
Sunday, April 29, 2007

He watched Serenity lift off with a cry of despair. 100 word drabble series with a hint of Rayne, 2 of 7.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1854    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

He watched Serenity lift off with a cry of despair. He went for his gun but it was wrenched from his hand before he could even pull the trigger. Rage descended on him, making him fight back, tearing them apart with bare hands.

Time passed in a haze of red. He hurt everyone and everything, trying to drive away the pain and betrayal that overwhelmed him and when that wasn’t enough, he cut himself instead. Then one day, he threw a body against a metal bulkhead but instead of looking away, familiar brown eyes met his angry blue ones.

River?


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COMMENTS

Sunday, April 29, 2007 4:00 PM

REDHEAD


If I remember right you did a piece from River's point of view. Can you link them or at least include links so they will all be read together.

Nice but both are so short I think they should be in one post.

Interesting idea though.

Wednesday, May 2, 2007 2:37 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...but that's the beauty of this series, redhead: the short but powerful collection of images being put forth. Allows for a feeling of perspective transition...though linkage between would rock;)

BEB

Sunday, May 13, 2007 9:41 PM

AMDOBELL


These pieces are powerful partly because of their brevity honed with a short sharp shock as each snapshot moves the story on. Really good and I love how you have made each section so tense. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me


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