BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

MARCHINGBAND

Kaila
Thursday, April 5, 2007

This is for my friend Kaila who died several years ago.


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oh little one,

come little one,

your life is done,

Rest your head,

on your bead,

it might be hard for some to hear little one,

but your now dead,

I loved you so,

but you chose to go,

away from me,

and now the bells tole,

I read your last letter,

I should have known better,

when you started to act weird,

you left me in the dark like a leper,

It happened so fast,

but it's in the passed,

its time to go on,

and let you rest at last.

COMMENTS

Thursday, April 12, 2007 11:53 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Hauntingly beautiful work here, MarchingBand. One minor spelling mistake - "tole" instead of "toll" - but overall, I was moved:)

BEB

Monday, April 23, 2007 2:03 PM

FIREFALL


Wonderful. But I think you meant to write, on your bed. You wrote, on your bead


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