BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

WHOSTHATGIRL

Daruma
Sunday, February 18, 2007

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AN: Daruma dolls are a traditional type of Japanese doll. When you make a wish, you fill in one eye. If the wish comes true, you fill in the other.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1760    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

River had insisted Inara open her present last. Inara lifted the lid off the box to find a small painted daruma doll nestled in a sea of red tissue paper.

"Oh, River, it's lovely!"

River looked pleased.

"Filled in one eye for you."

Inara noticed that indeed, one eye of the doll had been carefully dotted in with black ink.

Kaylee piped up. "Sweetie, isn't Inara supposed to make the wish?"

River looked very smug. "Knew what she's been wishing for."

Inara smiled. "Well, we'll see if it does."

Jayne shook his head. "I ain't bettin' 'gainst the moonbrain. Learned my lesson when I ended up doin' all her chores from the last tall card game we played."

When the party was all over, Inara and Mal stayed to clean up. She had just put the leftover cake away and turned around to find Mal standing far too close to her.

"Mal, you surprised me!"

"Hope ya enjoyed the little celebration. We need a bit of happiness here on this boat, after..."

"Yes...it was lovely. Especially now."

Mal looked a bit embarrassed but was not about to let the moment slip.

"Seems to me we forgot one very important tradition, darlin'."

Inara paled. "Not the birthday spanking, Mal. You can't be serious..."

He smirked at her. "Pinch to grow an inch, Miss Serra."

"Please. Anything but that..."

Mal leaned in, effectively pinning her against the refrigerator.

"Anything?" He drew out the word, whispering against her cheek.

"Mal, I..."

"Make ya a deal. One birthday kiss in exchange for a spanking." Breathing the words along her skin...

Inara knew a good deal when she saw one.

****

Several hours later, after it was all over and a sated Mal was gently snoring in her bed, Inara sat at her dresser, a satisfied look on her face as she brushed her hair.

She glanced down and noticed the daruma doll.

The second eye was very carefully inked in to match the first.

COMMENTS

Sunday, February 18, 2007 7:34 PM

DESERTGIRL


great job. I love Mal and Inara stories. So did Inara ink in the scond eye or did River do that while she was not looking??

Monday, February 19, 2007 12:18 AM

AMDOBELL


I have never heard of Japanese Daruma dolls so it was interesting to learn about them in such a lovely way. I want to know, was Inara's doll smirking? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Tuesday, February 20, 2007 5:07 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...now this was some brilliant stuff, WhosThatGirl! Definitely loved this tale to bits;)

BEB

Wednesday, February 21, 2007 4:48 PM

KACIDILLA


hee! i loved this one! i have made the mistake of saying "i'll do anything..." and learned to love the consequences...this story earns a special honor in my heart. thanks for writing it! :)


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