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The Devil Walking Next to Me - R for sex/language
Friday, January 12, 2007

The bars are temples, but the girls ain't free...
Belongs to somebody not me. Blah blah blah, yackety schmackety.
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CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2084    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Bound to happen, Mal supposed. Not the part about him and a certain Companion finally taking the tumble. When all was said and done, that almost felt like the hand of fate intervening to make it so.

Not that he minded that sorta interference. Hell, he welcomed it almost. The fact that this unattainable creature could be attained, by as unlikely a fella as him. That she felt warm and right and real in his arms.

That part he was all manner of OK with.

It was the devil whispering in his ear that was the problem.

What was she like before?

All practice and polish and wiles, with skills that men would hand over fortunes to experience. A far cry from his fallen angel who didn’t mind him smudging her up just a bit. Whatever they had, it was surely not practiced or polished. It was messy, raw and above all, needful. But there was no art, no grace to any of it.

What would it be like? the devil wanted to know. Would you even be able to tell the difference? Or is this all for your benefit, since you aren’t high-bred enough to recognize quality goods?

That particular devil, he was persistent, Mal had to give him that. And came visiting at the most inopportune moments. Sometimes, he could hear the little bastard in time to his thrusts in and out of her.

Is this what she felt like for good ol’ Ath? Is she holding back on you?

In response to the devil’s queries, Mal would change the timing, or graze teeth across her neck, just to feel her bear down on him, so that when he came, he could ignore the hwoo dan for those few moments of sharp bliss. But the sum’bitch would never completely leave him in peace.

You want to know, don’t you? You want to know just what it would feel like to have all those years of training tighten down on your cock, don’t you? Just to know if it feels any different. Just once.

Yeah, just once.

COMMENTS

Friday, January 12, 2007 10:23 PM

TAMSIBLING


Hmm, an interesting take on Mal's concerns/insecurities when with Inara.

I would think he would realize that Inara is probably more with him than less - or holding back. Being a companion is all about control, as Mal describes, their relationship is about anything but ...

Also, kudos on using a song from "Chess." Definitely an underrated show - imho!

Saturday, January 13, 2007 1:58 AM

AMDOBELL


I think Mal will work it out and give that old Devil the heave-ho. At least, he will if he has any sense. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Saturday, January 13, 2007 6:03 AM

PHYRELIGHT


I've always imagined that after they "took the tumble" that this is the reason things whould start to go downhill for them.

Saturday, January 13, 2007 11:49 AM

GIRLFAN


Excellently done - great take on Mal's possible worries - and love the use of "One night in Bangkok".

I think it begs for a companion (or perhaps "Companion") piece - perhaps to the tune of "Nobody's Side"?

Saturday, January 13, 2007 1:26 PM

EMPIREX


If anything would drive them apart, it would be this: Mal and his insecurities. This was dark, but right in character. I would also love to see a sequel from Inara's POV.

Monday, January 15, 2007 8:28 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...this was mighty spectacular stuff, WhosThatGirl! Definitely could imagine Mal having these kinds of insecurities after finally getting with Inara.

But what I wanna see is the flip side. Cuz I would bet a lot of cashy money that Inara's not all calm and collected her own self about having an intimate relationship with someone who's never had to restrain himself when with someone...someone rebellious. Gotta cause some pause;)

BEB


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