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Tuesday, October 31, 2006

um... a cry for help?


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Begging for your help

To stop the cause of pain

Sitting here in your office

Crying for presense of relief

Getting nothing but doubt

Words spoken unbelieved

Because of who you are

Because of who they are

Not the model victum

Not the model attacker

Disbelieving everyword

That may hurt the perfect word

Afraid you'll lose your prize

The fools gold apple of your eye

No one could ever bare to stop

The wonder children

The cream of the crop

COMMENTS

Thursday, November 2, 2006 12:35 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


It's brilliant stuff (to me anyway)...but I am not sure how to comment in this case....

Great imagery...but what it seems to convey is less than shiny.

Honest...but this truth makes me feel like nothing can be said that will be really helpful.

Oh well...

BEB


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