BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

JANE0904

Inara's song
Monday, July 24, 2006

Just Inara's musings on how she feels, and if Mal will ever admit it ...


CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1459    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

A touch of silk across my wrist

If you but asked I would resist

Remove the light above my door

The light that makes you call me ‘whore’

The men who pass beneath that frame

I do not know, and cannot name

But if you spoke with tender voice

And showed me love, gave me the choice

I’d rend the hangings from the walls

Turn off the light, ignore the calls

For you, my thief that plies the black,

Have stole my heart – don’t give it back

COMMENTS

Monday, July 24, 2006 12:52 AM

THEHEROOFWILLIAMTOWN


What can i say i like it.

Monday, July 24, 2006 4:17 AM

SMOKYDAYS


very nice, i like it!

Monday, July 24, 2006 2:10 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...now this is good;)

BEB

Wednesday, July 26, 2006 4:02 PM

DAUGHTEROFDREAMS


Wow. Now this I can picture her saying! You've got her perfectly in character and the rhythmn for this piece is amazing!

Keep it up!

Wednesday, July 26, 2006 4:33 PM

PRICEMERC


wow. shiny

Saturday, July 29, 2006 10:57 PM

SLICEANDDICE


Im not a big fn of rhyme but thats an awesome poem!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Sunday, February 18, 2007 1:35 AM

SOFI


=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!

Tuesday, March 25, 2008 5:08 AM

SHINYBRIT


That's really great. I mean... really! It really expresses Inara's emotion. I like it. =]

Tuesday, June 10, 2008 3:50 AM

SERENITYRIDDLE


This is super shiny. I like it lots.

Saturday, July 2, 2011 4:48 AM

ANONYMOUSE


I totally agree. Shiny!

Monday, December 12, 2011 8:31 AM

BARDOFSHADOW


As several others already said: I Like it.
And so do I.


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