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A NEW LIFE, ch. 7: Secrets To Keep

Thursday, June 15, 2006

Post-BDM: Keller tries to salvage his reputation while River manages to convince the crew that Simon is alive. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, River/Jayne (early)

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A/N: All right now, ya'll are getting spoiled, so be sure to keep leaving those comments or these chapters might just have to start coming slow as molasses!

Thanks to all who have read so far and commented.

And thanks again to Leiasky for some great comic relief and even better beta-ing!

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A NEW LIFE, ch. 7: Secrets to Keep

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Part of Keller’s many duties in ensuring that Simon was successfully reintegrated into his life was to track his social progress. Most of the time this was a fairly easy task as his friend did not go out often without him. However, his quick exit from the dinner party had left a hole in his report and he needed to fill it, or risk the wrath of the blue-handed men.

He had realized pretty quickly that going to Simon would only prove to be a lesson in stupidity. There was no way his still uptight friend would willingly share the events of the previous week with him; Simon was not the type to kiss and tell.

So, he’d changed tactics. Heading for the hospital’s third floor Keller wondered, and not for the first time why the Alliance hadn’t been able to loosen his friend up a bit when they’d done the mind warp. But then, Keller remembered that Simon’s dad, the inimitable Gabriel Tam had been pulling the strings; that was why. Keller was convinced the elder Tam had never had a day of fun in his life.

The doors to the lift opened and Keller stepped out, hurrying on his mission. Coming around the corner and into Alicia’s office, he was glad to see she was free. Entering the room without knocking, Keller slumped into the chair across her desk and said with mock seriousness, “Doctor, I seem to be having a case of crazies.”

Looking up at him with an annoyed, but slightly bemused expression, Alicia went back to work and said dryly, “I’m not surprised.”

“Ha, ha,” he said, leaning forward and placing his hand over the charts she was working on, making it impossible for her to continue. Sighing heavily, she fixed him with a patient look and asked, “Is t

Comments
Thursday, 15 June 2006 01:05
>Simon was just slow with girls. Why couldn’t they have fixed that too?

OMG! Is it bad that I just love Keller? Why couldn't they loosen Simon up when they did the mind warp?!?! Bwahahaaha!

I just love little Ellie and how she's been Kaylee's little shadow.

And Marie asking about Simon because of what kaylee had said about him was great.

And poor River, all that pain. but at least they finally believe her!
Thursday, 15 June 2006 05:46
*Squeeeeeeeeeeee*
Yay! River to the rescue! *happy dance*

Ah, poor Alicia. I have mixed feelings about her. I like her but Simon belongs to Kaylee. Hmmm.

Glad to see Kaylee's doing alright...comfort from a child...great scene.

This story continues to blow me away.
Great Job.
Thursday, 15 June 2006 11:35
*Keller was convinced the elder Tam had never had a day of fun in his life.*

I think I agree with that one.

*He was fairly certain that had the girl the power, he would burst into flames under her watchful gaze.*

While not altogether useful for the plot, Mal bein on fire an all, it sure would be funny to see.

*Was this really Jayne Cobb standing in front of him? Was Jayne really telling him that he cared for another human person and not just any human person, but River?*

Strains the mind a bit, don't it?
Wonderful. :)

*Of course, she could drop him to the ground with one good kick, but he could still pretend to be menacing.*

Ah Jayne, always the tough guy. T'would be funny to see him get his ass kicked by the 90 lb. psychic again.

Hell yeah, I am glad that Mal was finally convinced. Time for some thrilling heroics.

The offer still stands, should your comments ever stop coming (something I find extremely unlikely), to send you cookies to get you to post more chapters. :)
Thursday, 15 June 2006 14:57
Yes, yes, keep it coming!! I'm on the edge of my seat here!! Finally, Mal is remembering that River's not wrong. I can't wait for smarmy Keller to get his comuppance from the hands of blue. Actually, I'd like to see THEM get their comuppance (from Keller, maybe). Poor Alicia, but she's not Kaylee!
Thursday, 15 June 2006 16:05
Thank goodness Mal finally listened, I can't see it taking him this long to do so not after all the weird stuff she has done in the past and his faith in her before. At last the crew is going to go after him, the next painful thing will be finding a way to reconnect with Kaylee and that will only happen if they can find Simon. And Jayne, loved him! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 15 June 2006 17:11
WOW! I super heart this series, but you already know that! Okay, I am soooo part of the Keller club! ANd I like the dynamic between Alicia and Keller in the first scene-
“Doctor, I seem to be having a case of crazies.”


Looking up at him with an annoyed, but slightly bemused expression, Alicia went back to work and said dryly, “I’m not surprised.”

I like her dry wit and Keller's joking nature. Is it wrong that I like the baddie so much?
Kaylee at the home, *SOB* and how cute is Ellie?
The Everettes scene was powerful, heartbreaking and a nice little bombshell for MAla nd the rest of the crew! I love being spoiled, so please spoil me and let me have some of this goodness everyday...remember, not so pretty when I go through withdrawls! Thanks for sharing this:)
Wednesday, 21 June 2006 04:24
Long time no post! I hope it is only FF.net slowness that is keeping you away and not any real life issues. Tonight seems to be the first night I can go page to page without it freezing me out. I hope to see your next chapter(s?) soon.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 June 2006 02:01
So happy to see the site back up, but am sad all the feedback was lost. You know how much I love this story and you have many followers waiting for your next postings. Hopefully you will take pity on us and treat us to multiple chapters for the next few days. I am off to donate to Haken and this wonderful site so they can continue to keep this universe shining! After a week of deprivation, I am so happy to see this back up!

~Wickedwms~
Friday, 23 June 2006 19:21
It's great!!! Can't wait for our heros to ride to the rescue. Though seeing River with Jayne may give Simon that mental breakdown that is he supposedly recovering from.

Hope that the next installment goes up soon now that the site seems to be recovered. Apparently, Dr. Tam was able to resuscitate it.

Tuesday, 27 June 2006 06:10
Ya know...Keller's a Quisling hundan, but he's so freaking right! The Alliance & Blue Sun reformatted Simon's noggin, but they couldn't upgrade the humour/fun portions!?! They definitely have weird priorities;)

And TamSibling? This series still rocks! I am really loving all the angst and interpersonal conflict between the Believers (River and Jayne) and the Doubting Thomases (rest of the BDH) you written here:D

BEB

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