Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Another Girl Another Planet Ch 14

Monday, May 22, 2006

In which Jayne gets to be a Big Damn Hero

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2852    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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14. House Burning Down

Place is on fire, an’ then some. Jayne don’t even slow down.

A weeks’ worth of booze and brawling pull at his muscles, and he pushes it away. No time. He ain’t pulled his whole life down around him to lose her like this.

Smell of burnt sugar heavy on the air, ash blown in the icy wind. Chou ma niao place like this ain’t even got a fire service, he’ll bet, gonna be a mess of folks with buckets, and that ain’t enough. Still fires burn fierce and fast, and he has a picture in his mind of them rows of bottles.

Windows are blown, crazed from the heat, but the roof is still intact. Means the upper floor should still be there. Long as the stairs hold...

Tearing off a sleeve, dragging it through the snow, wrapping it over his mouth. Door‘s designed to keep out most things, but not six foot four of determined and frightened mercenary. Nothin’ fancy, just a shoulder into it, takes the lock out of the frame. Prays to anyone may be listenin’ as he dives into hell.

Kitchen ain’t nothing but a firepit, timbers of the wall blown in and the plumbing skewed from the wall. Takes it in, in a glance. Blast’s thrown the furniture over and it adds to the chaos, smell of burnt horsehair and feathers, and books flutterin’ like wounded birds.

Three of his strides in to the left and the bottom stair, there’s twelve, take ‘em two at a time, second door on the right and please God let her still be breathin’, let the floor hold, let the gorram floor hold, hot even through his boots, feeling the hairs on his arms crisp in the heat, but there’s the door through the smoke...

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Mal can’t even take the time to swear after him - he’s too busy.

“Reckon on the gorram still...”

Gunshots over the flames, distinctive.

Mal and Zoe look to each other. Then, like old times, Zoe low and fast, sweeping right as he goes left.

Somewhere ahead of them, an aircar lifts off, listing heavily to starboard and limping fast back to Southam. A few mor

Comments
Monday, 22 May 2006 18:36
"Kaylee being fierce is a bit like being savaged by bunny rabbits. Mal hides a smile."

Wonderful line, great story.

Monday, 22 May 2006 19:01
Love this story line. Your portrayal of River is so good. Loved her conversation with Jayne in the infirmary.
The line above from Kaylee is one of my favourites too.
Zoe playing her Captain with "common sense" is too funny.
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 03:24
Love this series here...love it on FanFiction.net...just love it general, SpaceAnJL;)

BEB
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 20:44
< It’s going to be far too easy to love him back, crude and tough and tender as he is. Because this big thug hijacked a damn starship and ran into a burning building to save her. She’s convinced.>

Me, too.
Sunday, 17 August 2008 21:27
~~“He ran into that.” Not a question. Looks up at him, puts her hands on his chest. “You. Utter. Bloody. Maniac.” Then they are in each other’s arms.~~

Liked that.

~~Relief leaves exhaustion in its wake.~~

So very true. I like the reality and the incredulousness of this story. And I can crawl out of my corner now.

Thank goodness.

Joanna

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