BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

JORJAREYNOLDS

EMPTY SPACES
Tuesday, May 16, 2006

This is my first and I don't usually write filks.


CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1847    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

A flame flickered

Dancing and twisting

Briefly only for a second

A glimmer of hope

Then darkness

The whispering winds

Came and scared it away

Coldness

Sorrow filled the space

The floodwaters rise

Drowning all in its way

Sadness

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 16, 2006 9:27 PM

AGENTRUSCO


this is very nice. expressive.

Monday, May 22, 2006 5:49 PM

SPACEFULLOFOBJECTS


Very good Jorja, for your first!

Short and to the point!

Wednesday, June 14, 2006 6:46 PM

SAFEAT2ND


That was me.


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