BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

ALLIETHORN7

Let Her Live, Part 3 (OR: The Duality, parts A/B, the Prequel)
Monday, May 8, 2006

Kay, just read it, please. Reviews=Shinyness galore, so make my day Shiny. Thanks to all you what have played along with me. The not so last part.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2477    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Kaylee spasmed as Simon applied the electro-shock to her chest on either side of her silent heart. His hands shook, shook with fear. His hands shook. But not as badly as his mind was shaken. His love, bleeding away her life beneath his practiced hands. These hands that couldn't save her... these hands that had killed her. The gun had been out of her hands. She had never been good in a fight. Niska had pulled the trigger... but he had aimed the gun. It had been an accident... but it had killed her. Still was killing her. The equipment she was hooked up to wailed at him, screeching her demise to him with cruel, long notes. He yelled "CLEAR" into the air before putting down the shockers again on either side of her deathly quiet heart. For a single, dreadful moment, nothing happened. Then, a tone. A slow, steady rythum beat a tatoo into the silence abounding around them. Simon leaned back and breathed a sigh of relief. *** Almost an hour later, Simon stood over her, triumphant, cradeling the bullet that had nearly taken her from him. But he couldn't really blame it. It was just a bloody piece of lead. Niska had pulled the trigger. He had aimed the gun. He let himself relax, just a little. Tentatively, Inara came over, from where she had been outside the room, watching her friends life hang in the balance. Where they all had been. Her regular silks were tattered and worn from the days past Hell. "Is... will she be alright?" Simon sighed at the room in general. "I think so. She-" Suddenly, the moniter screamed at him, mockingly heralding to him Kaylee's demise with brazen notes. Simon rushed to her side, ripping open her shirt. Propiety be damned, she was dying! Swiftly, he found the culprit. A slight discoloration of her chest, almost like a bruise in look. Looks can kill. Her left ventrical was bleeding away her lifeblood into her chest. No time. No time left. He cut open her chest, close to her heart. This would kill her or save her. Had to stopper the flow. Have to- *** Okay, so I have two ways to go from here: The fluffy way (she lives), or the angsty way (she dies). Since I couldn't decide which way I wanna go, I will just do both! Part A-Fluff. Part B-Angst. Enjoy the ensuing shinyness, next time it comes 'round. Happy trails! (And, if I haven't stressed it enough... LEAVE SOME GORRAM REVIEWS!!!!!!!! Thanks in advance, lol!)

-Danny

COMMENTS

Monday, May 8, 2006 9:28 AM

LEIASKY


I'd prefer fluffy, but who am I to choose! I write a damn lot of angst! It's be very true to the spirit of Joss' writing if someone died. I haven't yet been able to kill someone off in my writing.

I'm eager to see both versions. And - how about a longer chapter, hmm?! :)

Monday, May 8, 2006 9:29 AM

TWODIFSOKS


Once again, superb.

Monday, May 8, 2006 10:55 AM

RIPTHEJACKER


No matter what, in some way a reader will be disappointed with a fluffy ending, simply because we always expect the fluffy ending. There's ALWAYS a fluffy ending. I HATE FLUFFY ENDINGS! Except one where Mal dies of course.

Do both, I like fluffy endings lol

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 9:31 AM

MOOGLEYB


Argh, this is getting really scary. It's kind of a comfort to think that as long as I don't read the angsty ending then everything will be alright. Kind of takes away the element of surprise but then again I hate it when people die.

Wednesday, May 10, 2006 7:15 AM

BROWNCOAT2006


WOW.... great cliff hanger!!! Gorram shiney work!!! You shouldn't have posted the authors note and just posted the angsty one or the fluffy one... but that's just me... wouldda been a really intersting way to lead into a continuation of this series or put an unkown end to a great little ficlit :) (of course you could also post the opposite ending after people bitched at you if ya had posted angsty :S)


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