BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - HORROR

ALLIETHORN7

Let Her Live, part 2
Friday, May 5, 2006

YAY for me!!! Still no writers block!!! sequel to the first part, which I posted earlier today. Enjoy the ensuing shinyness. Oh, and yes, I'm evil, twisted, yadda yadda. For the angst, blame stephen King. For the rest, blame Joss.


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It wasn't supposed to be like this. Kaylee... Simon. They weren't supposed to go. Was supposd to be her what got taken. The plan was in ruins. Niska had taken him, and now- No. No, Kaylee, don't, don't you DARE- No. Too late. He's broken. Can't be fixed. Brother by blood, sister by love. Family by battle. All sins forgiven. All love is lost. Everyone dies alone. But Simon is not alone. Gonna save him. They are all lost without them. One to heal the ship, one to heal themselves, both to save eachother. Gonna save them. Can't fail. *** "Pull the trigger." Niska was breathing down her neck, baiting her and prodding her down along this road that she had never intended to go along at all. Just a picnic... just fun. Sweet, innocent fun 'twixt two who have been together for only a month now. It wasn't supposed to be like this. Her hand was on the trigger. Sealing his doom and death and dark- No. No, Kaylee, don't you DARE- No. Too late. No, never too late. Slowly, her finger eases off the trigger. The gun falls to her side. "No. I can't... can't do it. You can't make me." Niska smiles his evil smile at her, the one that makes her skin crawl in revulsion. "Is that so, my pretty flower? Is that so?" He advances on her, ready to take away the gun. Can't take her from me. Baobei, my Kaylee... you can't- "NOOOOOOOOOO-" Boom. "Simon!" *** Just then, Mal, Jayne, Zoe, Inara and River all burst into the small room that had held Mal and Wash... so long ago. They shoot at the guards surrounding Simon and Kaylee. When the smoke settles, all of the guards are dead. They were too surprised to put up a fight. Niska is dead. A life for a life. The color drains from Mal's face. "Is that-" Simon cradles Kaylee's head in his lap, blood straeming out of the wound on her chest. One bullet... She sputters, and coughs up a little more blood. She's dying. Dying in his arms. She weakly reaches up her hand and strokes his face, now haggard from the tortures he's been through. She whispers, "Simon... Simon, don't let me go. Please, Si-" She coughs again, and more blood spills out. "... jus'... don't... lemme...go..." Tears are rushing down Simon's face. He leans over and kisses her brow. "Never, Kaylee. Never again."

COMMENTS

Friday, May 5, 2006 9:05 AM

LEIASKY


whoa, ok, I do hope Simon is well enough to fix it!

Did she shoot herself or was she hit by 'friendly fire'?

Friday, May 5, 2006 10:18 AM

TWODIFSOKS


I have to say this hit me and it hit me hard.

I actually came back to re-read three times.

you are a very good writer and get right to the point.

Love me some more :)

Friday, May 5, 2006 12:33 PM

MORDSITH


oh no, Kaylee! Simon better save her (of course its more dramatic if he doesn't but a girl can hope right) Wonderful story, loved the first part, loved this part too.

Ps I responded to your other story as annoynmous, forgot to log in before hehe,

Friday, September 22, 2006 6:30 AM

BLACKBEANIE


Holy crap! Is she ok?


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