Alpha, beta, Revisions...
Saturday, June 6, 2009

I need a beta. copy that. But how does one get a compatible beta for the story offered?

First off, this story is not for the faint of heart. Or the under caffeinated. Or those who prefer linear continuity. Or...

This is because it's entirely from the POV of River Tam. Portions of her diary at the Academy, specifically.

But before I post it, I need some helpful editing--really a first time author here, and I'd like to iron out some of the usual things--characterization, readability, continuity. Or if it's even working.

So, this here's a cattle call (yuk yuk) for somebody who's got a spell in space(or wants to read moonbrain musings) and give critical feedback.


Friday, June 12, 2009 2:15 PM


Gilove2dance: Sounds good. I'll send it over when I've got the current situation figured out.
Maybe a few days.

Steamer: Yes, no Rayne. Definately Rayne-free, by all that's shiny.

I find this an entertaining paradox: that one of you is rabid Rayne and the other is rabid anti-Rayne. Luckily it don't deal with the subject.
See you on the Rim.

Friday, June 12, 2009 1:51 PM


As long as it doesn't end up becoming Rayne, shoot it on over. I'll give it a look-see.

Monday, June 8, 2009 2:25 AM


I am willing to offer my services if they are still needed!


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