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Shadesiren

Expanding my Fan Fiction
Monday, June 14, 2004

I'm writing it wierd, but not on purpose. I wrote some paragraphs, and realized it was kinda summary. That's not so bad, I'm finding it kinda helpful.

Anway, I expanded the intro of Maurice, the cook.

I'm desperate for a little constructive criticism, so feel free ;)

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Tuesday, June 15, 2004 4:58 AM

BLEYDDYN


Could you post the text here, or at least post a direct link? Your site doesn't work properly in my web browser.

Thanks.


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