Heh. What REALLY disturbs me is that the troll is 17 and spells like that.

Humanity is doomed.

Don't waste energy raging about stupid people :-) As others have said: two people in love having good sex is a wonderful thing and should bother no one anyway. And by rating it NC-17 you surely did enough.

What really bothers me is, that the guy is only 17 himself. I would expect to find a comment like that from worrying parents or grandparents, but not from a teenager. I sure would have appreciated a text like this when I was 17 and the last thing on my mind would have been that it could somehow "corrupt" me or a kid brother. This guy is old already, but maybe he will get over it when he has the first good sex himself ;)

Oh, I will, don't you fret none. I just needed to vent about it a little.

Just ignore the anon, they didn't even have the guts to use their screen name, if they are even a member of the site. It's obvious that people love your fics by how much they have been read. So keep up the writing and ignore the bad vibes from who ever that was.

I know, I'm such a perverted little deviant, writing about two adults expressing their feelings for each other physically. I must have some real emotional problems, huh?

Yay sarcasm!

OMG, you *freak*, how dare you write about two adults choosing to have a healthy, consentual sex life in a healthy, progressive relationship?!?!?

That's... uh... who would do that kind of thing?

(by the way, that's sarcasm, I'm totally on your side).

I didn't comment on your fic (Simon/Kaylee just isn't my thing, but I support your ability to write the damn thing!), but if I were you... ignore it. Just... ignore it.

Firstly, it's your writing, you have the choice to express it as you want to.

Secondly, you did the right thing and labelled it NC-17, which automatically suggests that there will be either very descriptive sex, or very descriptive violence/death/cruelty, etc...

From what I've seen, your fics don't ever rely heavily on descriptive violence, cruelty or death.

You're also right in suggesting that children who *do* get onto the site (and other sites where fanfic is openly posted) should have a very strong conversation with their parents/guardian about what they can and cannot read.

Keep writing. Most of your comments/feedback are good. Write for yourself and write for them.

Ignore the flamers and the trolls, there will always be a few people running loose around the net.

*gives you a cookie*

*glares at the troll*

Okay, to be fair, I doubt they would have kept going if they'd been aware that little sister was watching, but yeah.

Heh heh...dirty River!

That whole thing about the purety of their love made me go... um, were we watching the same movie? 'Cause I'm pretty sure they were gettin' it on while his sister watched.