requesting story help
Saturday, March 27, 2004

Okay, it may be soon or in a couple of weeks, but I'm going to desperately need a beta. Next part of Death By Any Other Name features Zoe alot, and well, I'm finding that I suck at writing her in my opinion. Her dialogue never seems as slangy for the most part as Mal's, but she's not as cultured as Inara or Simon. Also, I know she's pretty respectful towards Mal, but I think in some situations she'd use his first name (and i can never remember to pay more attention during the episodes to tell for certain.).

Anyway, if anyone out there feels they have a handle on Zoe and wouldn't mind reading over a draft, let me know. It'll be a plus if you've enjoyed what I've posted so far of the story, but any help will be appreciated.


Sunday, March 28, 2004 4:46 AM


I don't usually read fanfics, but I could give it a go. Editing is part of my job most days.

Sunday, March 28, 2004 4:03 AM


I wouldn't mind reading a draft.


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