Chapter 11 of Trials and Redemptions - Posted!
Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Hi all!

Chapter 11 of Trials and Redemptions is up now... hope everyone likes it! As always, I very much appreciate any constructive criticism or comments.

Again I must apologize for not posting sooner, but real life decided to rear it's ugly head and interfered with being able to finish it.

I must say thank you to those who did comment after I posted Chapter 10, but I'm still a little concerned by the still low number of comments! Understandably the first chapter has lots more hits than the rest, this story won't be everyone's cup of tea, and I fully expected a rather low percentage of return readers. But at the same time, each chapter is getting fewer and fewer readers, but there aren't any comments! I can't make it better if no one wants to tell me what's wrong... so if you like something, but even more so if you don't like it, speak up! As long as you're polite about it, and most people on here are (based on seeing comments on other fics), I have no problem with hearing what anyone has to say.

Chapter 11 did not go in any way, shape, or form, anywhere near my original plans. And consequently I will have to revisit Chapter 12 to weave things back together... but have no fear! With any luck I'll be able to finish 12, 13, and 14 before this weekend, when I'll be going out of town for about two weeks, and thus unable to post. So as a reward for all the dutiful readers, there's a good chance of a TRIPLE POST on Friday!



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