"Aliens, you know, that's something everybody else has done and is doing. It's a great metaphor to play with, but it's not what I'm interested in. I'm really interested in 'you are there,' in 'you are a part of this.' And I think aliens take you out of that. I also need to spend some time away from latex." - Joss Whedon
GUEST HOME |  LOGIN |  CHAT | NEWS | COMMUNITY | BLUE SUN ROOM | FFF.NET STORE | EPISODES | FIRECASTS | MARKETPLACE | MY FIREFLY | RESEARCH | INFO  
 


POST A COMMENT ABOUT THIS ITEM

 

 
 
The Other Side of Serenity
By Archer
Wednesday, May 21, 2003 22:29
TIMES READ: 3581
RATING: 8

Another side of the coin.


Old sergeant told me that you don't know that you were in the battle of such and such until a month after it's over. When you're in it, it's just you trying to kill them, them trying to kill you.

It's different here. Coming in, they told us this was the big one. Serenity Valley is the prize, the key to the whole campaign. We've got the numbers, we've got the support, we've got the angels on our side.

The damn Browncoats knew we were coming, knew for a while. They scan the cortex too, read all about it in the press releases, read the discussions from people who've never had to tie off the stumps of a woman's legs while she yells for her children. They kept talking it up, 'decisive edges' and 'overwhelming superiority' and all kinds of idiocy.

What the Browncoats don't have in troops and metal, they make up for with sheer bloody guts. First night in, they take out a battalion CP. We had hell clearing out all the infiltrators behind the lines.

Pound on them for days, a whole valley full of craters, burned-out tanks, destroyed fighters, bodies and parts of bodies everywhere. Three major pushes I've been in, one of theirs and two of ours, never had one like this.

Just lost a corporal, three rounds through the lungs. Couldn't understand what he was saying when he went, couldn't hear a thing.

They say that they'll break any time now. One more attack, and it'll be over. We've had three 'one more' attacks already. Prisoners are saying all their officers are dead, that a sergeant is holding things together over there. A lot of them think he's going to turn this thing around.

To hell with that. To hell with him. Air support is coming in, and I hope they kill every damn last one of them. Word is that the Browncoats aren't bothering with prisoners anymore.

The fighters are sweeping their positions while I run an IV on one of the new kids. His name is... hell, I don't know what his name is. He'll never walk right again, probably, so he just scored a ticket home.

Suddenly one of the duals opens up from what was supposed to be a secured position. The lieutenant is on the line, yelling for a team to move up and get on top of it. Too late.

Hope the fighter nailed the gorram bastard when it went in. Cold comfort's the only kind you get in this hellhole.

The support is finally coming down. Word's getting around that the Browncoats are surrendering. Could've fooled me, with all the shooting still going on. After what I've seen, I don't think they're ever going to give up. All that's coming is another Serenity Valley somewhere else, and another and another, until they're all dead.

Saw the damndest thing. This Browncoat was standing on the hill, watching the ships come down. Man gets killed next to him, and he doesn't even flinch.

What the hell is the matter with him, the stupid bastard? Doesn't he get it? The war's over for him. I wish to hell it was for me.


Kaythryn

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 05:34


Marvelous! Its really interesting to see that war through the eyes of an Alliance fighter in Serenity Valley. I especially love how he knows about and almost... respects maybe, the Browncoats Sergeant. Very shiny. Please keep posting more fics.

   Delete  |  Top  

Sarahetc

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 06:05


This is remarkable-- original, action-packed and emotive. This one-of-a-kind change in perspectives really reinforces, reifies if you will, what we already know about the battle.

   Delete  |  Top  

futuresmith

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 07:01


You really captured the intimacy of this battle. I felt like your narrator (is s/he a medic?) was in a foxhole not 100 yards away from Mal.

   Delete  |  Top  

Anonymous

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 07:01


Great tone and well written. You have given me something to think about. Thank you

Badger

   Delete  |  Top  

Archer

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 07:44


Yep Futuresmith, the narrator is a medic.

Thanks everyone. I've thought about fanfics, but nothing had really fermented in my brain yet until last night. Ya'll other writers know how it goes. The scene just starts constructing itself in your head. For me it usually starts with a single sentence or image.

After I got done, I said to myself "There, did my fanfic. Wonder if anything else is going to come up?"

Took about an hour for the sequel to start putting itself together. Unless I get busy with something else, I should have it done in the next day or two.

   Delete  |  Top  

Anonymous

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 08:34


really enjoyed this. very immediate sense of the battle and the identical sense of ineptness of leadership felt by the line soldier since the time of the Roman legions

   Delete  |  Top  

Wulfhawk

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 13:00


Ain't just folks gettin' kilt in a battle like that. A man can lose his compassion, his faith, all the best parts of hisself. Lotta cripples walked outta that damn valley with all their fingers and toes.

Good job, Archer. Damn glad to see it.

   Delete  |  Top  

Anonymous

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 13:24


BC

Very good and it does sound like a medic. Someone who's seen all the death and tried to stop it but there's no way to stop war. That's one aspect of humankinds personality that I think we as a species are stuck with. It's the reason this old world is such a mess.
Thanks for the different point of view but still the same.

   Delete  |  Top  

Eleri

Thursday, May 22, 2003 - 17:53


Love it for the grit, the anger, the sorrow and the despair. The medics right...the battles are named in far away offices long after it's over. Those that survive them rarely speak of them in the same way (if at all) as the paper pushers do. Looking forward to the next chapter.

   Delete  |  Top  

Channain

Thursday, June 26, 2003 - 03:53


this one gave me a chill. I could see Mal so clearly, only from the other side of the valley...

funny how we oftentimes forget there's always more than one perspective in a battle like this.

   Delete  |  Top  

Anonymous

Saturday, December 13, 2003 - 18:27


Love it, love it, love it!! I hope I can write Firefly fics that are even half as good as this! And the portrayal of the Alliance medic is great. I like the way you slip in that line about the Browncoats taking no prisoners... because history has shown that in war, atrocities were often commited by both sides, irregardless of which side was morally right. I've been thinking similarly along that line... Browncoat wants revenge on the Alliance because of atrocities committed, then the Alliance man wants revenge on the Browncoats because of atrocities... and it becomes a vicious cycle, repeating itself over and over again. Great story.

   Delete  |  Top  

DeSangro

Saturday, December 13, 2003 - 18:28


And those are my comments up above. :) I still love the story, only this time, you know it's me. :)

   Delete  |  Top  

Delia

Friday, May 07, 2004 - 08:42


I like it -- tight, concise, well-written and thought provoking. Good job.


   Delete  |  Top  

Bellona

Friday, November 25, 2005 - 06:14


wow. i just...wow...

b

   Delete  |  Top  

  All FIREFLY related graphics and photos on this page are copyright 2002-2009 Mutant Enemy, Inc., Universal Pictures, and 20th Century Fox.
All other graphics and texts are copyright of the contributors to this website.
This website IS NOT affiliated with the Official Firefly Site, Mutant Enemy, Inc., or 20th Century Fox.
FIREFLYFANS.NET is part of the SHINY UNIVERSE NETWORK