BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

ALIASSE

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Monday, March 22, 2010

Plans are put into action.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1116    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

As well as, to her surprise, being the sort of woman who sought out opportunistic sex with a mercenary she barely knew (and it had hurt her civic leader-ly pride, just a little, to find out that this was his role; on the other hand it confirmed her instinct that he was a man to be discounted as a mate), Lucy Lee was scrupulous about her laundry. It wasn’t that she felt guilty or sinful, but washing the stiff, sweaty uniforms of thirty-seven Alliance soldiers provided a balance to the gloriously dirty pleasures that she had, not too noisily she hoped, enjoyed with Jayne in the hay loft.

She rose early, therefore, and set up her tubs in her back yard, where townspeople passing that way might see her at her virtuous labor. She held up the jackets and pants and ostentatiously went through every pocket, because that was what a good – and she was good – laundry woman did. Her heart – well, her loins – missed a beat when she came to Jayne’s well-fitting pants. With womanly curiosity she delved deep and came up with – of course, what else? - nothing.

Not so with the captain. She recognized the red shirt as his and unscrewed the tightly-balled piece of paper she found in one of the top pockets. If it had been an odd scrap she might have been comfortable with throwing it away, but it had clear, neat writing on it: the name Saffron, followed by a colon, then a column of names – Southern, Moskow, Fraser – and next to that another, comprised of what looked like dates.

Seeing a chance to further prove her diligence, Lucy finished checking the pockets of the remaining items, and then set off to find Mal. After asking several people she found him in the house where one of the settlers – Susan – was being put up.

Handing the note to him with an explanation of how she had found it, Lucy hoped that Mal didn’t know what was going on between herself and Jayne. She realized straight away, however, that the sight of it had a very powerful effect on him, one that put any other thought out of his mind.

“Thanks,” he said very gravely. He smiled sadly, with resignation, as he took it almost tenderly: “This might be all that’s left of my ship.”

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Several days later, following instructions from Yan, Mal and Jayne uncovered the weapons that had been hidden on board the Alliance vessel. They loaded them into the shuttle and set off for town. As planned, they arrived so early at the barn holding the prisoners that not even its owner, a spry 60-year-old with an unrivalled work ethic, was up. Once they had released the Alliance men from the barn, they distributed the weapons as stealthily as they could.

Then Kaloy – now second-in-command – led the men, relishing the feeling of the weapons in their hands, back to the ship.

Yan, Boxer and Trudo stayed. It was their pledge and Mal’s guarantee that they would not try to get their ship functional and leave ahead of time. They waited near Lee’s house until the sun came up.

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Lee had a full day ahead of him: Warminger had coin enough to extend the pavement of sorts that lined the town’s main square and he had taken charge of the war that had broken out over which direction it would go in. He also had to prepare for a long-awaited meeting with a group of wholesalers from Meridian over selling their metal by-products – kitchen wares, mostly – in the store he owned with his sisters. And there would also be frequent, more impromptu meetings with people who stopped him in the street or came into the store.

Or knocked at his door.

As soon as he saw Yan and two others standing behind Reynolds and the mercenary, Lee understood if not the detail then the fact of what had happened: somehow, somewhere along the way, he’d missed a very important trick.

He smiled, apparently self-deprecating. “Well, ain’t we the naïve, caught-unawares backwoodsmen,” he said, affecting a drawl that Mal recognized from their first conversation about the prisoners.

“I’ll take naïve and you can have – not naïve, if it all comes down to seeing combat,” he said, forcing Lee to stand aside as he walked into the house.

Lucy came down the stairs in time to see Jayne and the Alliance men follow. Jayne shifted awkwardly and looked serious when he saw her, not knowing how to be around her if he wasn’t doing it with her. With lowered eyes she slipped into the kitchen, where she could listen.

“Looks like it’s given you the edge though,” Lee replied, taking the papers that Mal handed to him, “knowing your way around weapons and soldiers and all.” He glanced through them, taking in the salient points. “You didn’t draft this though.”

“No. The settlers did. It’s their mine.”

“Goin’ to get a glass of water,” said Jayne, intending to share a grope with Lucy.

Lee had gone very still. “A bicarium mine,” he said, almost humming with silent, disbelieving excitement.

“Well, the terms are all there. Get your lawyer man to look it over. Make any changes ‘t seem reasonable.” Lee nodded, absorbed in the document. “In the meantime, can’t see any reason to change where everyone’s being put up. You can add it to the bill. Except the soldiers of course. They’re back on the ship.”

Jayne returned; Lucy had pushed him away and followed him into the hallway.

“We’ll have to get everyone together; now,” she said to Lee.

“D’you hear?” Lee asked with a grin. “It’s bicarium!”

“I heard,” said Lucy, who considered herself, and was, more business-minded than her politically-minded brother. She took the papers, glanced at them and turned to Mal. “We’ll come back to you with our response. In due course.”

“Work’s starting in the mine today,” was Mal’s reply.

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Mal parted from Jayne and Boxer outside the house.

“See you at the mine,” he said to them; then, turning to Yan: “You met our psychic assassin yet?”

As he made his way towards the meeting hall, where he hoped to find River, Mal patted his top pocket, making sure that the note from Book was still there.

COMMENTS

Monday, March 22, 2010 12:35 PM

BYTEMITE


Mwahaha. Nope, can't keep them prisoner after all.

But, interesting. This is a plan that actually benefits everyone, and he's laid out the bargaining chips right at the moment he gives a show of force, in case someone gets greedy. That's some good negotiation work.

Monday, March 22, 2010 12:45 PM

ALIASSE


He's always had it in him. 'Why would anyone want to leave Serenity?' Because it's pschologically unhealthy to stay there, you idiot!

Monday, March 22, 2010 12:57 PM

BYTEMITE


He sure could on occasion make it seem better than it is. Look at how thoroughly he duped poor Inara into staying as long as she did. Fluttery hearts and warm feelings can make people do funny things, I suppose.

Monday, March 22, 2010 1:13 PM

MINCINGBEAST


Where is the Jayne smut? Where? So I can, you know, gag and be horrified and so forth.

Lee, in my opinion, handled the surprise well. Like how he lapses back into his country bumpkin routine, with just a hint of his greed and teeth...

Also, really like the way Mal is being fair, and presenting options. This way, when he has to shoot everything (Mal's true calling is shooting things), it will be especially unnecessary and poignant.

More! (not jayne smut, mind you)

Monday, March 22, 2010 2:56 PM

BYTEMITE


I dunno, you're being curiously specific there, mincingbeast... Mnnnugh, I just brought it upon myself, didn't I. Next chapter, all about Jayne getting that grope and that poke. What am I saying? I blame you for my loss of innocence! My innocence!

*Byte has got kafooey*

Tuesday, March 23, 2010 10:45 AM

GILLIANROSE


The part with Lucy giving Mal back the note was very poignant. And then there's the opposite, Jayne's befuddled mind settling on kitchen groping as an appropriate way to spend the time while those that use their frontal lobes are negotiating a profitable peace :)

Nice line at the end about the psychic assassin! I'm looking forward to the next part, to seeing how River, Simon and Kaylee are going to receive the news of their travel arrangements. And of course, to getting even a little step closer to Inara!

Tuesday, March 23, 2010 8:09 PM

PLATONIST


The note...nice touch,

Was Serenity unhealthy for all or only for Mal? I'm curious to your thoughts on this. Personally I’m undecided whether or not it was a place of reconciliation or stagnation for him.

Tuesday, March 23, 2010 11:07 PM

ALIASSE


I'm seeing a theme here:
Bytemite: This is a plan that actually benefits everyone
mb: Mal is being fair, and presenting options
GR: So nice how Mal's plan doesn't involve explosive and terrible violence . . . negotiating a profitable peace

He has learned! And it's thanks to Inara's challenge, the sacrifice of Wash and Book and the loss of Zoe. The destruction of Serenity and the death of Dogger too.
Also, practically, the fact is that it's a bicarium mine - there is no way that it's not going to attract Alliance/Blue Sun attention. Mal is very astute about these things and I think he senses that. What's the point of violence to hold on to something that is only going to bring down far more trouble?

Was Serenity a healthy place? As long as Mal was Captain - and he was inseparable from his ship - then I'd say no. Starting with Zoe and the Dog, I'm trying to start explaining the culture that Mal established on Serenity and how this couldn't be sustained as a good place for a bunch of people to keep living in. It was a refuge for all of them, but people can't stay refugees forever. So, to use Platonist's words, a place of reconciliation in the short term that in the long term can only become one of stagnation.


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