BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

ALIASSE

Battle-lines
Saturday, February 20, 2010

Inara finds herself immediately back in the fray.


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Once again an enduring fascination must be credited. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alexandre_Bontemps for Good-Son. The description from ‘He was…most secret’ to ‘kindest man imaginable’ are lifted almost word-for-word from Saint-Simon. *hearts Saint-Simon and being able to plagiarise him in fanfic*

If you can honestly be bothered to look back to the details that this chapter builds on, they are to be found in Truth Was. Which unfortunately builds on now-deleted fics. I’m wondering if I should ask Haken if they’re backed up anywhere, because I can’t remember the details myself :)

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The surprise and delight Inara felt when she saw who opened the doors of House Madrassa to her were immeasurable. It was very late and the light in the grand hallway glowed dimly, but there was no mistaking the medium-sized, jowly-faced old man standing before her.

“Good-Son!” she exclaimed. What are you doing here?, though it was what she wanted to ask, would have been coarse. Instead, allowing all of her grateful joy to show in her expression, she said: “It is a sincere pleasure to see you here!”

“Thank you, Madam,” was, of course, all Good-Son said in reply. Equally to be expected were the slight bow, the ‘allow me’ as he relieved her of her hand luggage, the way that he averted his gaze, discreetly, but without servility.

Inara’s thoughts accelerated, halted, clashed in her mind. Good-Son was the Chamber Master of the Guild’s central House, had been since long before Inara was born. But here he was, carrying her bags, leading her up Madrassa’s vast, shadowed, crimson-carpeted staircase to her quarters. To question him while he walked ahead of her would have been graceless. When they reached the first landing, however, she increased her stride a little so that they were almost side-to-side.

“Are we fortunate enough to have acquired your services?” Inara asked with a gracious smile.

“Yes, Madam,” Good-Son replied, taking the key to Inara’s quarters out of his sleeve.

Inara, following Good-Son up the next flight of stairs, was utterly astonished. For as long as he had been Chamber Master he had been the Guild High Mistress’s right-hand man. He was known by all to be most secret, most faithful, and entirely devoted to the Guild. He had the most open access of any man to the central House’s private apartments - where, amongst others the High Mistress lived - which he entered at all hours and always by the back. His only skill lay in serving the Guild, and he was wholly intent on that, without ever departing from his sphere. All the secret orders, the private audiences, the sealed messages to and from the central House, in fact all the mysteries of the Guild passed through his hands. That might well have ruined the character of one known to have been influential for the past fifty years, and with the Society of Sihnon at his feet. Yet he never forgot his place, far less so, indeed, than the young blue footmen under his orders. He harmed no one and always used his influence for good. Great numbers of people, some of them highly placed, owed their fortunes to him, and he was modest almost to the point of breaking with them if they so much as mentioned it. He loved procuring favors solely for the pleasure of it, and he had been throughout his life a father to the poor, a refuge for the disgraced and afflicted, and the kindest man imaginable.

The last time Inara had seen him had been at Tasmina Sharre’s funeral. Now, his placement at Madrassa (since clearly he was there to work) could only signify that a momentous change had taken place in the Guild. Feeling that it had to be connected to Tasmina Sharre’s demise, and therefore her own fate, she longed to question Good-Son. A direct approach was out of the question: she had to proceed with absolute tact and rectitude in order to spare him the pain of being asked to speak out of turn.

“I am so happy to hear it,” said Inara, noticing, as she walked behind him, that he was undeniably more stout. “Have our numbers increased so much that we require a Chamber Master of your quality?”

They had reached the landing on which Inara’s quarters were to be found. Good-Son stopped. “No Madam, the number of senior Companions currently residing at House Madrassa stands at seven.”

Inara showed not a flicker of her horror, her dismay. From eighteen to seven! Once again, this could only be connected to the events that she linked with the rise of the influence of the Tangs.

“And novices?” she asked.

“There are no novices,” Good-Son replied.

Inara’s grief at this piece of news was almost instant: House Madrassa had been pre-eminent in the training of young Companions. Their complete absence now seemed to confirm absolutely the fear she had confided in Mal, the one he had thrown back in her face – that she had run away, leaving the House that had nurtured her to ruin.

“Ah,” she said, feeling a difficulty in mastering herself. “I have lately been training young women myself. It is such important work.”

“Yes Madam,” said Good-Son. “Your belongings have recently arrived from that Training House. Sheydra Nǚshì arranged for their return. She spoke very highly of you.”

Bless Sheydra and her discretion: if anyone were to find out about her time at the Training House, and the arrival there of the Operative, it would not be because of her.

“I wonder what need we have of you, then, when our numbers are so low,” Inara said.

And suddenly she found herself looking into Good-Son’s old eyes – since he was looking at her, and his gaze, full of knowledge and compassion, was unavoidable. “There is a great need,” he said, very quietly.

Inara blinked, held her breath against the feeling that her eyes were about to fill with tears. She could not believe that this man knew anything about the treatments she had needlessly endured, the effects of which she was struggling with after her journey.

“Do you assist Adminstrator Tang in her duties?” she asked Good-Son, echoing his tone.

“I do,” said Good-Son, and then, in the most hushed whisper, “though I continue to assist the High Mistress of the Guild in hers. At times those duties are – incompatible. But naturally the High Mistress retains precedence in all things.”

Inara felt immediately that she understood. That Good-Son had been placed at Madrassa as a counter-point to the influence of the Tangs; that a struggle for the future of the Guild was underway.

COMMENTS

Saturday, February 20, 2010 2:26 PM

BYTEMITE


*Intrigued hum* Setting established, tension building. But at least Inara has an ally here. We hope.

Good link too. Reminds me of some of your other stories that have to do with the French Court. Is the source of inspiration a foreshadowing? Will we see debauchery and chicanery like what characterized Versailles?

Saturday, February 20, 2010 11:03 PM

ALIASSE


Saint-Simon doesn't go into the debauchery and chicanery. He alludes to them only in terms of describing someone's character. In some ways you could see his diaries as an endless procession of obituaries (like the one for Bontemps above) - he tends to do a character study of people when they die, and may then describe them as 'thoroughly debauched' or the malign influence that they wielded. One memorable lady apparently used to relieve herself wherever she felt like it and then just lift her soiled skirts and walk away. Charming. What you might call a 'take-away'...:)

Sunday, February 21, 2010 7:40 AM

GILLIANROSE


Ohhhhhhhh. First of all, I adore Good Son. And you did such a beautiful job of the delicate way in which Inara has to show first her joy, then her concern and apprehension. I felt I could understand completely the reasons for her cautious and oblique remarks and questions - not only to observe the etiquette of the situation, but also to honor Good Son's preferences and temperment.

I can't WAIT for more! Both threads of this story are coming along so well :)

Sunday, February 21, 2010 9:03 AM

BYTEMITE


Ha ha! Oh, I wonder what Saint Simon would have made of Kaylee in Shindig? Supposedly the actors were on set so long and Jewel couldn't just go to the bathroom, because it would mean a very long period of getting OUT of all the corsets and the bustle and lacing and hosier and hoops and general insanity. So, Jewel chose the most selfless and most obvious remedy.

Actually, I hear that dress in general kind of had issues. It was very hot, and the light material had a tendency to stain. Makes one wonder why in HELL women put up with that kind of fruff?

Sunday, February 21, 2010 9:11 AM

BYTEMITE


Combination of history, plot tension building/intrigue, and excellent discrete Inara characterization. And Good-Son. How do people write such good OCs, that fit so well within the reality of the verse? *envious grumbling*

Sunday, February 21, 2010 9:15 AM

BYTEMITE


Make that "discreet" Inara, though in her set apartness, I suppose she could also be discrete.

Sunday, February 21, 2010 10:14 AM

ALIASSE


'How do people write such good OCs' - in this case, by lifting an entire section from another author :)

Sad thing is, of course, that Kaylee didn't even look good in that dress. *miaow*

Sunday, February 21, 2010 10:32 AM

BYTEMITE


I'm not sure looking good was the point so much as "I get to dress up like a princess! Squeeeee!"

It's like when you see those four years olds running around a grocery store dressed like fairies. They have food stains all over them and it's probably three months after Halloween. But they're just... SO HAPPY. Your practical adult side wonders if the parents really should be indulging them like that, your realistic side tells you that there's no way in hell ANYONE could've said no to those kids let alone the parents, and your human side is thinking "Awwww, so adorable."

Sunday, February 21, 2010 10:49 AM

ALIASSE


Well, the parents probably needed to buy food as an alternative to starvation and this was the only way of getting the four year old to agree to leave the house...

My point was that, if you look really, really, really great in something it might just be worth it. But if you don't, it's not. Don't hit me.

Sunday, February 21, 2010 11:03 AM

BYTEMITE


*feint miss punch!*

I'm a girl who wears trousers and blouses to weddings. Looking great and worth don't even enter into my equations. With Kaylee, I think it's more of a fun factor thing. Something new.

Monday, February 22, 2010 11:36 AM

PLATONIST


Fascinating tale about the spiral decline of House Madrassa, after Inara left. I would have never guessed because you didn’t leave many clues, did you? Except the Tangs, I remember then being badies.

Serenity gone and now this… interesting developments for Mal and Inara.

Tuesday, February 23, 2010 9:29 PM

ANOTHERSKY


“Do you assist Adminstrator Tang in her duties?” she asked Good-Son, echoing his tone.

I love these kind of questions. They tell about the asker, the answerer, and the situation.

Saturday, February 27, 2010 2:20 PM

CLIO


Loved this, and the last one. Am just getting to them now – you've posted so much so fast!

I did want to mention that Haken replied to someone's log entry about a month ago about recovering deleted entries – he said he could do it – I think he asked the poster to send him details as to when and under what username she posted and that he could look in old builds? You should do it. It would be nice to look back at them, and I'm sure there are folks who are just picking the story up who might like a backward look. I remember one in particular I loved, in which River listens to the walls around her. Truly awesome stuff buried somewhere here at fff.net.


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