BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

ALIASSE

Going forward
Wednesday, February 17, 2010

The beginnings of a way forward for Mal and his crew.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1122    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Mayor Osborne Lee was standing by his open back door eating breakfast pancakes, or rather stuffing them hastily into his mouth as though the faster he despatched them the less of a fact it would be that that was what he was doing. He’d started off one at a time, but now he was separating them from the rapidly-diminishing pile in threes, folding them nimbly into triangles and swallowing them almost whole.

It was good. What did it matter, being mayor of Warminger? – meaning, there was no ceremony to stand on and even if there was he wasn’t the type ever to stand on it. Still, he wished his mouth hadn’t been all smeared with syrup when Mal appeared in the kitchen doorway.

Mal tapped the door to announce himself, suppressed a smile as the mayor whirled guiltily around.

“Was your wife let me in,” he said.

“That ain’t my wife,” the mayor replied, gulping and wiping his face with a clean cloth. “Didn’t never marry. Three older sisters babyin’ me since the day I was born, and the one you just met worked out food was the way to keep me a baby forever.”

This time Mal didn’t attempt to hide his reaction: a ‘you’re giving way too much away’ raised eyebrow.

The mayor stopped wiping his face. “That sounded weird,” he said. “Well, okay. I’m thirty-two and I live with my sister. Can’t get away from the weirdness o’ that.”

“You ain’t the only one,” Mal said.

“Yeah. Well. Folks is weird,” Lee replied with a shrug.

“Good slogan.”

“It don’t leave no one out,” said Lee with a nod.

“Every vote counts.”

“Mine was ‘Vote Lee’.”

“Works too.”

“Was my sisters what won it. Bakin’ and talkin’ ‘s what it takes. Husband is what they all need, give ‘em a proper channel for their energy. Got any single men in your party?”

It was obvious to Mal that self-deprecating irony was a habit of Lee’s. But he had no doubt, from Lee’s expression, body language and tone of voice, never mind his house, particularly the scrupulously-maintained weaponry mounted in the hallway, that he’d won the mayoralty on his own merits and that, most likely any of his sisters could do the same if she chose to.

“Got a whole soldiery out there with nothin’ to do,” Mal replied, the question about his romantic status still resonating painfully in spite of his refusal to acknowledge it.

Lee’s expression changed. No more joking around.

“Shame harvest is done,” he said. “Could’ve used a workforce like that.”

“’s what I came to ask about.”

“What’s that?”

“What you’re thinkin’ to do with ‘em – the Alliance men.”

“Them havin’ blown up your ship an’ all.”

“’s their ship I got a particular interest in.” Lee didn’t prompt him. “Salvagin’ it.”

“You reckon you got the know-how for that?”

Mal nodded.

Just then they were interrupted by another visitor, who Lee introduced as Harlen the jailer.

“Got a special request,” Harlen told Lee after introductions were done. “Yan wants a service. A memorial.”

Lee looked at Mal. “That it?” he asked Harlen.

“That’s it. Says he wants to honor the men what died in the attack.”

Lee thought for a moment. “Might’ve made up my mind one way or the other by the time I get to the jail,” he said to Mal. “’specially if you was to come along with me.”

Harlen excused himself, saying he had other business to attend to, and Lee and Mal set off right away. Mal felt Lee glance at him once or twice as they walked.

“Gonna see what Yan has to say,” he said in the end. “But seems like the right thing to do, to say yes. So long as you and your people are agreeable.”

“Ain’t got a problem with it,” Mal said, “and that goes for my people too,” he added, not caring whether Lee meant his crew or the Pity settlers.

“We want to keep ‘em,” Lee said then, stopping to face Mal. “Me and the main folk around here, we sat down and talked on it last night. Not keep ‘em like they was chattels or nothin’. But that’s the kind of justice we do. Don’t got the time nor the space for lockin’ able-bodied men what want feedin’ up. And look around you. There’s plenty work to be done.”

Mal looked around and confirmed what he’d already seen: a place that had negotiated the transition from settlement to town a few years back and was still going forward with progress firmly in its sights. The variety of shops and traffic, three enormous grain silos on the near horizon, a distant movement of cattle like the shadow of clouds moving across a field – all attested to the fact that Warminger was doing well. That was why they’d come here, wasn’t it? – having heard tell of this successful settlement on more than one world they’d visited since Miranda, they’d headed here in search of fresh contacts and work.

“We’re doin’ all right,” Lee went on, as though he wasn’t perfectly aware of how well Warminger was doing. “But we ain't had no new blood since Warminger was a settlement. Ain’t properly on the map yet. Got all excited when the Pity settlers came, ‘til we saw how they just wanted to keep to theirselves.” A pause. “Them and their mine.”

Lee looked at Mal and Mal looked back. Now seemed about the right time to drop the backwoods hicks-act they’d both been keeping up: Lee knew about the mine, or at least suspected; probably didn’t know it was bicarium but being as shrewd as he was might suspect that too.

“You did some work off-world for the settlers,” said Lee.

“Right.”

“They got their mine fully-functional?”

“Anything you want to know about anything that’s their business, you should ask them,” said Mal, as expressionless as he could be.

“True. Only they’ve never seemed too – trusting towards us.”

“Not you. The Alliance.”

“On account of their mine not being registered.”

“Who wants to pay all their taxes?”

“Just thought, maybe the attack was to do with the mine. And if there’s more to come, could be dangerous for us.”

“They wanted us. The girl. You were there.”

Lee nodded. “Yeah, yeah. But I got to check. I’m mayor of this place and responsible for the public’s safety.”

Mal was certain that Lee’s enquiry about the mine was prompted as much by a sense of the opportunity as much as the danger it presented.

“So, about the Alliance men,” he prompted, and Lee continued heading towards the jail. “Not chattels you say. And you want to put them to work.”

“Yeah. For some fixed amount of time. We ain’t got laws about bombing neighbouring settlements but, you know, we’re resourceful, we can make something up. Couple years feels about right.”

“So, not chattels, but you’re wanting to put them to work for a couple years.”

“Not chattels. That’s bothering you though.”

“Man in my line of work comes across plenty of offers of profiting off of slavery.”

“Ain’t talking about that.”

“And what’s going to stop them from escaping?”

“I was hoping you and your crew could help us there.”

“How’s that?”

“Well – guard them. Stop them. From escaping.”

Mal’s eyes widened with astonishment and, with a feeling as though his chest was cracking open, he began to laugh. It was loud, whooping, almost-doubled-over laughter that made passing townspeople stop and look. Him and his crew – from Alliance fugitives to Alliance jailers! In his head, he was still thinking it was hilarious, ridiculous, surreal when, through the cracks in his chest, some of the pain he was bearing began to leak out: the war, Shadow, Retrieval, Wash, Book, Zoe, Inara. Serenity.

It was a public place. Several times during their walk Lee had interrupted their talk to greet the many people passing by. But he couldn’t help it: couldn’t help the way the pain rode out of him on the updraw of his breath, changing his laughter to sobs. He was grimacing, gulping. Lee grasped his arm with one hand, his shoulder with the other.

“Whoa there fella,” he said. “Keep it together. Keep it together.”

It helped. Lee shielded him from view with his body. He managed one longer breath, then another. He closed his eyes, pushed the pain down through his diaphragm. Supporting Mal slightly, Lee led Mal the rest of the way to the jail where Yan was waiting.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 12:23 PM

BYTEMITE


Good introduction, amusing. Though the way he was eating those pancakes, and the guilty reaction. Hmm. Came across less comical and more like, well, that he has something to hide. Wonder what kind of perks being mayor there gets. Perks beyond deciding to send people who have nowhere else to go off to work in a mine, and have charges "made up" to justify it.

Lee's a likeable fellow, all right, but I'm not sure I like him. No rat is half so successful without their charm.

Heh, Alliance jailors... That is funny. And I could also see what was coming next, the moment Mal let himself laugh. That's what happens when you bottle things up. Release tension, well, everything else gets released too.

I suspect there's going to be some resistance to salvaging the Alliance ships... Not going to stop Mal, though.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 12:33 PM

ALIASSE


Do we ever see him belly laugh? I can only think of the moustache story in The Message and that was more of a - titter?

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 1:02 PM

BYTEMITE


Mal has titters?

Strange. Did anyone else hear all that screaming and shrieking just now, or is that the demon in my head again?

Oh, right! The other readers! And the "Bytemite should refrain from saying horrible and eternally scarring stuff" rule! Funny how I forget about that.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 1:17 PM

BYTEMITE


More seriously and less sadistically, no, I don't think we ever really saw Mal in a fit of uncontrollable laughter. I mean, his prank on Simon got some good laughs, but I still wouldn't quite call it belly laughs.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 5:32 PM

ANOTHERSKY


I think that was the closest to real laughing Mal got. "Shoulda seen his face."

But yes, at the words "Mal titters", my mind's-eye Wash started making all sorts of comments. :)

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 5:56 PM

BYTEMITE


Well, of course. Aliasse knows exactly what things to say to get inner Wash-es all a tittering. Mine is beside himself. He's positively abreast.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 6:02 PM

BYTEMITE


I'm such a boob.

(ahem) Sorry, Aliasse. Continue discussion with story?

Unless, that is, you want to join in? It's kind of a titillating conversation.

We continue, or not, at your request or admonishment. (Sorry again!)

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 7:12 PM

BYTEMITE


I like your OCs. Have I said that? First Dogger and the people of Pity, and Tara and her sisters, and now these guys, and this mayor. They're fun, and yet writen with maturity, and you can tell everyone has their own agenda.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 8:05 PM

PLATONIST


Wow, incredibly emotional last scene, it was unexpected.

And, I agree with B, your OCs are well done, with just enough personality to keep the reader interested, without boring the heck out of us, when we really don’t care about them, compared to our BDHs.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 11:38 PM

ALIASSE


How very DARE you not take my fics ABSOLOOTER-TOOTER-TITTERLY seriously?

As for 'We really don't care about them' - I couldn't agree more! :) They are there as vehicles for things to happen for our BDHs and that's all. But yes, they should have personality so we don't all get bored - hence the pancakes.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010 11:46 PM

ALIASSE


Also, talking about Lee, is his solution for the sudden influx of Alliance prisoners of war really that bad? Two years migh be a bit harsh :) but I see his reaction as typical Rim-practicality ad-mixed with the relishing of a chance for a little revenge...

I don't see people dragging themselves out of the harshness of Rim existence without a measure of ruthlessness.

What would YOU do with them?

Thursday, February 18, 2010 11:18 AM

BYTEMITE


Well, let's look at the long term repercussions of incarcerating Alliance military forces when the war is still fresh in everyone's memories and tensions are high between the Rim and Core. And I think I do mean rePERCUSSIONS, because if they don't get their asses bombed and occupied within six months of them getting word of this little "rebellion," I'd be much surprised.

Suddenly the idea sounds a lot less shiny. Mal has the right idea. Get the ships salvaged, wave the nice Alliance men goodbye, and send off anyone who wants to go with them. Forcing people to stay not only is unethical and manipulative, but the Alliance guys might come to resent being used, and might not see it as a deserved punishment. And then you just bring undue attention on yourself, which is the last thing this settlement wants, what with their aiding and abetting fugitives like the people of Pity. Don't give anyone any reasons to come looking for revenge.

Thursday, February 18, 2010 1:25 PM

ALIASSE


And THIS is why you'll never be Mayor of Warminger!

:)

*titters to self*

Seriously, have I not got across that these Alliance soldiers have been abandoned by the Core? That nobody cares what happens to them?

Thursday, February 18, 2010 1:50 PM

BYTEMITE


No one was paying attention to them and they didn't have any new orders because the man in charge of their mission went AWOL. Doesn't necessarily mean some military bureaucrat somewhere won't notice some of their expensive ships have gone missing and come looking for them. If there is one thing bureaucrats care about, it's money and how much something costs.

And you never know if someone is looking for a reason to start a war, or make an example of people... propaganda can be a powerful tool.

Thursday, February 18, 2010 2:08 PM

ALIASSE


I KNOW you Byte :) and I know you'll think of something I haven't but:

My take is that the whole Operative-led mission was such a total disaster that the powers that be washed their hands of it; they couldn't care less if the men left behind live or die, would prefer it if they did die, in fact, but wouldn't do anything to make it happen because they see them as ants. Any bureaucrat who brought attention to this loose end would be left with no doubt that it was best forgotten. Though the Operative is called an Operative of Parliament, I'm assuming that whoever it was that authorised and funded the mission he led was, even if part of the executive, over and above it. And that if they want this mission forgotten, it will be. The biggest danger in not forgetting it is that anything to do with Miranda comes to light - big incentive, if you assume the Miranda wave didn't get very far (which my series does).

Obviously Lee doesn't know this, though.

Thursday, February 18, 2010 4:11 PM

CLIO


I LOVE those opening two paragraphs. You have such a way with visual description – such an ability to conjure an image in the mind of the reader – and such a wonderful, wry tone, which is what makes all your original fiction so wonderful to read.

And of course the rest is great, too – and I'm excited at this possibility of a salvage vessel, and was relieved, I think, when some of Mal's anguish finally came to the surface. And I see that I don't have to wait for the next segment. :-)

Friday, February 19, 2010 3:37 PM

GILLIANROSE


I really liked this, particularly the way you depicted the close-to-the-vest, good-old-boy charades back and forth between Mal and Lee. Where they were looking and not looking. And I completely believe that the settlers would indenture the men if they thought they could get away with it. With their vessel forfeit and no one from the Alliance military inquiring after them, being put to work is not the worst possibility.

The end was one of those great moments I would love to actually see (hear that Joss?) - it's so emotionally complex. Mal's been white-knuckling his emotions for years, deluding himself that he can make every part of himself follow orders , toe the line. But human beings aren't made that way, even ones as tough as our Captain.

I think it's noteworthy that the heartiest laugh we saw out of Mal - telling stories about Tracey - was at Tracey's wake, when the man Mal and Zoe had spent years protecting had just died a violent death at their hands, on Mal's ship. Maybe laughing was as close as he could come to his feelings about the whole thing.

Friday, February 19, 2010 4:22 PM

GILLIANROSE


Ah, I have to give a grateful shout-out to 2x2 - the wake for Tracey wasn't after they shot him, it was earlier, when Tracey was only dead-ish.

Saturday, February 20, 2010 6:54 AM

2X2


Hmmmm I thought I'd commented on this already, but I don't seem to see my comment here.

Anyway, I thought it was great. The ending, I could completely believe, after everything, it was extremely emotional and hit hard in just the right way. People are talking about how often we saw Mal laugh, but I'm wondering more, how often has Mal let himself cry? I don't think he's ever worked through the grief of everything he's been through... now, finally, a breaking point... I think it's good for him, 'cause you really can't heal until you've gone through the cleansing process, can you?


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