BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

ZZETTA13

Law of the West : part 2
Monday, December 22, 2008

What a mess. All they wanted was a little thievery then this happens.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 782    RATING: 10    SERIES: FIREFLY

Law of the West: part 2

Malcolm Reynolds looked out past the expanse that lay in-between him and the rickety old bank he’d been scoping out for the past half hour.

Zoe had gone back to get the horses they’d used to get to their hiding point. The thing about small towns, strangers and outsiders weren’t welcomed and sure as hell weren‘t trusted. He’d decided to keep the crew of Serenity at a distance using only Kaylee to go in and visit her cousin, which was true, but also have Jayne tag along as her boyfriend, which was stretching the truth quite a bit if the town folk really knew Jayne.

Mal heard the beat of horse hooves on the ground approaching . Suddenly Zoe appeared all excited.

“Captain time to go, mission aborted!”

“What?”

“No time to talk! Time to move!”

He was up in the saddle in a flash and the two were storming forward in headlong flight back to Serenity.

“ What’s up Zoe?”

“Don’t know sir! Just got a message from Shepherd Book saying to abort mission.”

There was some commotion back in town behind them but they kept ahead, strait to the path.

Sprinting up to Serenity, Mal and Zoe could see that Shepherd Book stood in wait for them outside of the transport near the loading ramp.

“What’s up Shepherd, what’s this all about?”

“Donno captain. We just received word from Kaylee that the plans have changed and the mission should be canceled.”

“ That’s great! We were just about ready to make our move!” Mal said.

Zoe shot him a glance that told Book otherwise.

“ Said she’d tell us about it when she got here. Wash went to get her on the MULE.”

*******************************************************************

Some time later they heard the sound of the MULE coming threw the brush. Wash brought the machine to a halt before them and Kaylee hopped off all dusty and looking a bit ruffled.

“ What’s going on Kaylee?” Mal asked as he stood watching her brush the dust off her clothes.

“ Well two things captain.” She said walking up to Mal, “ First, the cargo ain’t coming. There was some kinda disturbance at the ore mine and they changed their minds about delivery till tomorrow.”

“ And two?” Mal inquired.

“ Jayne got arrested.”

***************************************************************** Kaylee and Jayne had been waiting on the far side of town in a watering hole named “The Pitch Forward” only a couple hours earlier. They weren’t sure of what they were doing only waiting for a signal from Mal. It looked as if this thing was going to turn into a “by the seat of the pants” operation. The crew of Serenity had the layout of the town and knew a few of the main building which included the bank. Not much else to think about really. One street running east to west, one north to south. A few houses and businesses around town center.

“ You see that, “ an old, drunken prospector was trying to indulge Kaylee in conversation., “ I built that.”

“ Close your trap Jack. The young lady ain’t interested in hearin any of your stories about the old broken down stuff you’ve erected in this town.”

“ Broken down….? Well most of it’s still standin ain’t it! Besides like I’ve told you and the sheriffs a hundred times, I ain’t no carpenter. I’m a miner. So keep your flap shut or I’ll take down them shelves I put up for you last week.”

Jack looked over at the wall where just the week before he’d put up two liquor shelves for Reed, the owner of the Pitch Forward. They were nowhere to be seen.

“ Hey where’d they go?”

Reed just looked at the bearded fellow rolled his eyes and continued to polish the glass he was drying.

Jack gazed over at Kaylee.

“ Come over here and sit Miss.” He staggered over to a nearby table, “ I’ll buy you a drink.”

Kaylee looked over at Jayne. He’d had a few drinks himself but they sure as heck didn’t need any trouble now.

“I’ll go.” She whispered to Jayne.

Jack saw that Kaylee was talking to Jayne.

“ Bring your friend over. I’ll buy him a drink too. Made this chair just for you.” He said patting a wooden seat next to him.

Jayne and Kaylee walked over to the table and just as the Serenity mechanic began to sit the chair fell to a dozen pieces and she flopped to the floor.

“ I’m sorry Miss….” Jack was saying as Jayne walked around the table to pick her up.

“Come on Kaylee we sure in a ruttin pea patch don’t need this!”

“Hey wait a minute I’m apologizin……………….”

As Jayne picked Kaylee up he felt a sharp pain across the top of his head. He’d been hit by a bottle. Swinging his arm up he blocked the next blow then delivered a punch to Jack in the midsection. Air rushed from the lungs of the old man as he crumpled to the floor. In a flash there were lawmen all around and the next thing he knew…….. Jayne was in cuffs and headed for the lockup.

*******************************************************************

“ I told them that it wasn’t Jayne’s fault but the sheriff told me that he would be in the jail for safe keeping and until he cooled off. I think part of it is because we’re strangers in town.”

“ That’s just great!” Mal muttered, “Jayne in the slammer and another night we gotta spend on this troublesome rock before we can get something worthwhile.”

“ Well just look at the positive side captain.” Kaylee said.

“ Yeah…..and what’s that?”

“ I found out the jail and the bank are the same building!”

End Part 2

COMMENTS

Monday, December 22, 2008 4:35 PM

ANGELLEMARCS


Ok, the last line is the best. Kaylee, always trying to be bright. LOL!!


POST YOUR COMMENTS

You must log in to post comments.

YOUR OPTIONS

OTHER FANFICS BY AUTHOR

Purple J's Part 9
A silly notion he knew, but Serenity had come across stranger things during her illicit adventures. And her crew knew of things that were even worse. Like Reavers. Were Reavers real? That question was up for debate on the core planets, but Mal and his crew knew they were. An expressed difference between Reavers and your average, everyday, run of the mill cannibal was that the latter at least cooked their meals. With Reavers it may have been all about listening to their victims scream as the inhuman beasts ate their food alive. A shudder coursed through the Captain.

Purple J's Part 8
Author’s note: Good morning Ladies & Gents! New fic up for today. “Purple Js” # 8 follows. It’s been a while since I’ve been able to post, or even read and review my fellow browncoat friends work. I have some time now and will be doing that this weekend……as far as this new posted story goes, well I hope it shows a link between chaps 7 & 8, and I hope that if flows well. Thanks for reading, Z

Purple J's Parts 7
Good morning Firefly browncoats. I’m posting up a new chapter of the “Purple Js” fan fic below. I’m veering off the beaten path on this one, and there was a bit of a debate in my mind if I should include it? I offer up a bit of back-story that will become more clear in later chapters, so I ask that you bear with me on this one and if it isn’t to your liking I understand, still I felt a desire to put it up. Thanks for reading…….. Also, in my mind the character of Carlos Coffer would be played by a young Bill Paxton, just a visual to set the stage, Z

Purple J's Parts 6
Deans eyes widened a bit, “So that explains it,” he said! His puzzled look calmed, he returned his attention to his bowl of breakfast, seemingly now, understanding that Jayne’s family may be plagued with a genetic malformation that was likely spawned by the intermingling of close relations. Family ties that cohered into a knot. That may be why the poor girl seemed incoherent at times. Z

Purple J's Parts 4 & 5
Kaylee meets up with Quinn. Cecil boards Serenity, and the rest of the crew settle in as if this were just another milk-run. Will they find out different? Z

Purple J's Part 3
I’m giving this a more adult rating. Not because of any graphic description of blood, gore or sex. But because of implication. I don’t want folk getting the wrong idea. The written works is just to move the fic forward, in a general direction. That is all, thanks for your understanding, post out Z......

: So Malcolm Reynolds has put a plan together. Will it work? Therein lies the real question doesn’t it! Of course Mal is good at improvisation, as is his team. Will it be needed from the very start, maybe not, read on to find out, Z


Purple J's Part 2
Malcolm Reynolds makes his way back to the comfort of his ship. Plans are to explain to his crew the scheme he and Monty mulled over on Monty’s ship. Of course nothings been finalized, there can always be changes. His idea now is to see what his crew thinks, Z

Purple J's Part 1
Malcolm Reynolds prepares for a new job, well at least he’s in the planning stages. He also finds out there are ways of spilling his guts that he didn’t know his cousin could do to him….nasty!

The Hunger Flame : Shortness
Inspired by the Suzanne Collins movie, and her post apocalyptic scenario of the world, here’s a little ditty about Katniss Everdeen, and her ability to kill!

OT: Cries From Outpost 31 part 1
Hello, the story below is the beginning of a new story arc of which I have no idea how many chapters it will take to complete. It continues the story of “The Thing” , John Carpenters 1982 version, and the recent prequel at the Norwegian camp which came out in 2011. However, the story now picks up again in 2012 at the U.S. Antarctica base at McMurdo landing. Time has dulled folks memories of the men who were lost that mysterious moment back in 1982, but there are some that remember, and want to know more. Check out to see what happens ( author’s note: best to have seen both “Thing” movies before reading the story), just saying.


OUR SPONSORS