BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SHINYBRIT

I'll Stay With You
Tuesday, April 8, 2008

This poem is based on the episode "Out of Gas." I just wrote it on the spot after recently watching that episode for the millionth time. I guess it's just kind of like a Mal to Serenity thing. Enjoy.


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Goodnight, sweet thing

We’ll lay down to rest

As the whole place empties

As pain fills my chest

The air’s growing thin

Chills fall down my spine

And I’m still here with you

I won’t leave you behind

They may be found now

And that’s fine with me

As long as I’m still here

With my Serenity

I told you it’s my job

To go down if she does too

Don’t convince me otherwise

Just please don’t try to argue

I’ve done all I can

To keep her alive and well

And I think I’ve done good

From being through such hell

So my darling, I’ll stay here

As you close your eyes and sleep

You’ve done so well, my dear

So don’t consider this defeat

I’ll just close my eyes

There’s no use to make amends

So we’ll just sit in this sea of stars

Until the very end

COMMENTS

Tuesday, April 8, 2008 8:40 AM

SEVENSKIES


Again, another great writing. I love it!

Wednesday, April 9, 2008 6:03 AM

COLT999


That's some good stuff.

Wednesday, April 9, 2008 9:12 PM

DUN


:-)

Sunday, April 20, 2008 6:25 PM

KNIGHTREYEDER


Nice an' appropriate. :-) I like.

Out of Gas and War Stories, can't get enough of 'em.

Monday, June 30, 2008 9:00 AM

THECHASSIT


i was listening to the song "on the drift" while reading this...that an overpowering amount of Out of Gas for one person

Monday, April 13, 2009 4:44 AM

HERASHADOW


Brilliant! Got me all emotional-like. Think I shall be watching 'Out Of Gas' tonight. Great work!


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