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Judas and Mercy Chapter Four

Monday, May 15, 2006

The crew are each finding their own ways of healing. Jayne-centric fic.

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My apologies for not getting this chapter done sooner. My muse found himself (yes, I know that they are female, but for me, it’s a male, just accept it and move on) working on other projects. Please comment, the good, not so good and the awful when you finish reading. It’s especially helpful in the writing process. Enjoy!


Disclaimer: all things Firefly/Serenity are the property of Whedon et al. I’m only playing with his toys for a spell.

Spoilers: the show and the BDM

Rating: Teen and up



The building was unassuming in its simplicity from the outside. The only writing was in Mandarin and said relaxation, the apparent code word in New Athens for whorehouse.

Pushing through the doors, the crew of Tylon’s Pride were immediately bombarded by the smell of opium and other drugs. Captain Tylon’s face warped into a wicked grin. “Jeanine!” he bellowed. “Get yer ass down here.” He chewed his cigar and looked to Jayne. “You’ll like her. She’s a good’un for vigrins.”

The other four men laughed, the joke not seeming to ever end. Being the newest crewman, Jayne had little option than to take the ribbing.

“Well, speak o’ the devil.” He removed his cigar and planted a dirty kiss on the woman’s lips. She responded in kind. “Got someone here for ya.” Tylon nodded towards Jayne. “Needs his cherry popped.”

Jeanine eyed the young man. “Virgin, huh?” She grinned as Jayne reddened at the continued laughter. “Don’t mind these boys.” She waved a hand at them. “Wasn’t that long past when they were comin’ in for their firsts.” She turned to Tylon. “Same as usual?”

He nodded.

“Well, then...what’s your name?”

Jayne looked sheepishly at the crew and Captain. If being a virgin had been difficult to live with, his girly name had been nearly impossible.

“Jayne,” Bodine answered with a lyrical sneer.

“All right then, Jayne,” she grasped his hand, “why don’t you come on upstairs with me.”

Unable to say no, Jayne went with the woman amidst the catcalls and hoots of his

Comments
Monday, 15 May 2006 04:07
I am guessing Mal don't know Jayne's mom is dead. Does Jayne not remember or he just didn't tell him. I am remembering the previous story right, aren't I. I seem to remember that Jayne was captured in the bar after finding his mother dead. If I am remembering right, sounds like Jayne may have some slight brain damage. Poor Jayne, hurt and sick and scared he's going to be useless and jobless and familyless. I love this fic, can't wait to read more.
Monday, 15 May 2006 05:02
Just excellent, as always! I love your writing style and how you weave the Jayne's past in each chapter.

And I like that I never quite know where you're going with this!
Monday, 15 May 2006 05:10
Yeah for more great writing. Waiting eagerly for the rest.
Monday, 15 May 2006 12:24
Another great chapter. I love Jayne's uncertainty about everything, and how you weave the story from early to later.
All the crew's voices are excellent too and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Monday, 15 May 2006 14:34
I've been waitign for the next chapter of this with such anticipation!

And you delievered, as always. I love this story so much. It's rather Jayne centered (which I love and adore), but even better than that, it shifts to each of the crew as well. Their thoughts and feelings in relation to what's going on around them.

It adds a fullness to the story that most authors (myself included) don't bother with.

Simply put: Fantastic.
Tuesday, 16 May 2006 01:28
whoops, that was me, didn't sign in. I *heart* this story.

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