Chapter 10 of Trials and Redemptions

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Chapter 10 of Trials and Redemptions - Posted!
Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Hi everybody!

Chapter 10 of Trials and Redemptions is up now... hope everyone likes it! As always, I very much appreciate any constructive criticism or comments.

I apologize for not posting sooner, but I just wasn't happy with it until I finished it about half an hour ago. But on the subject of critique... I'm a little concerned that nobody has posted any comments! Understandably the first chapter has lots more hits than the rest, this story won't be everyone's cup of tea, and I fully expected a rather low percentage of return readers. But at the same time, each chapter is getting fewer and fewer readers, but there aren't any comments! I can't make it better if no one wants to tell me what's wrong... so if you like something, but even more so if you don't like it , speak up! As long as you're polite about it, and most people on here are (based on seeing comments on other fics), I have no problem with hearing what anyone has to say.

I think this chapter pretty much speaks for itself, so I don't have a lot to say other than I hope people like it. Hopefully Chapter 11 will be done very soon, but it's the only one I have left that hasn't developed past scratch notes, so it might be a week or two. But with any luck, maybe by this weekend. :)

COMMENTS

Thursday, June 26, 2008 12:27 AM

SPACEANJL

Sorry, tried to read it, but can't deal with Rayne. Just my personal ick. (but then folks don't like what I've done with the 'Verse.) I see what you mean about your take on River - there is something about it that really makes me think of Asian cinema grudge flicks.

On the comment front - I'm experiencing the same thing. I think the enthusiasm comes in waves. As long as you have a few die-hard fans, write for them. Hell, write for your own amusement, if necessary. :)

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